I found this story to be quite enjoyable and very interesting. Bravo to you.

This sucks! I've read a lot of bad stories in my time on this site, but this is by far the worst. It is so incredibly illogical, OOC, and unorganized! Nothing you wrote was developed in any way. I was looking forward to a R/Enjy drabble and instead I got this.

Hehehe...

I haven't much else to say but that.