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Reviews for: The Walls Have Eyes
ChiharuLamperouge 4/14/12 . chapter 1
Hi!

I just read your story! Love it! Specially the ending, I can imagine Lelouch's face, so flushed! Jejeje... xD
Bleached-Whale 11/2/11 . chapter 1
Omfg that's gotta be the best fucking thing I've ever read! Seriously, I laughed so hard at C.C! and the lemon... \\\ honestly, that was brilliant. I mean, you're not really C.C... Are you?
Flesh is Yummy 9/16/11 . chapter 1
Yay! Friday! Time to R&R.

Aw, I liked this. It portrayed Suzaku and Lelouch's relationship very well. I enjoyed the part where Suzaku was frustrated at Lelouch for still hiding behind Zero's words and wanting him to be honest because I can imagine that type of conversation happening in canon during ZR.

The wallsex was hot. Obviously. Not going to go into that. XD

I think one of best parts of this fic was the extended italics in parenthesis part. Since you didn't use many parentheses in this fic, it had a very strong impact. And I like how you pointed that out: it wasn't *just* about the sex - it was about being together and trusting one another. That's very important.

The end section from C.C.'s POV was very good. It showed that she wasn't just about trolling or teasing the boys. She wanted them both to be happy, and...the part about the "empty feeling" she had was very poignant...even if it made me a little sad.

(Also: yay for another porny yet eloquent ZR fic to add to your growing collection of porny yet eloquent ZR fics XDDDD)
Shaitanah 9/16/11 . chapter 1
Mmm, wall sex is hot))) For all I know, that's what walls were invented for. XD

I love you. Even when I hate you, I love you. - Such a perfect, concise sum-up of their relationship. Beautiful. 3

She's sure she'll get a single room from now onwards, and that's all she wanted anyway. - LOOOOL))) So manipulative.

Great story, sweetie!
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