Amazing fanfic! I luv how you included a lot of details. Great job!

great ficcie !

Very believeable stream of conciousness... there's something to Ami that I had never seen before, a biterness and an cceptance that she never had in the Anime. Made me feel like I was reading the manga... you have a very peculiar style of writing, one that really drew me in. I do hope you write more of these little snippets... they're too much fun!

Lily

I'm not going to lie to you- i love the story. But i didn't really understand it. So did he love Ami? Or was he interested in Kunzite?

Ahh! I like this a ton. This seems a lot more in character to me than most Ami/Zoicite fics. I mean, honestly, I simply can't see them being a truly romantic couple... But like I said, I like the way you portrayed both of them in this. I especially like the last line. And the title, too. _

Quite well written. Loved the last line. Though, the first paragraph was a little confusing. If you made the sentence beginning "I wonder if he is drawn ...", as the start of a new paragraph, it would have flowed better. I really liked the glimpse you gave of the Silver Millenium. Keep writing! -Wyse

Ooh... Wonderful little glimpse into it. I like it. Though I'm surprised that none of the reviewers as of yet have bothered you to continue it.

I'll have to say, my favourite lines are the one about the ribbing in the corset and that last one. "Damn him. Always prettier than me."

I enjoyed this, and I am not a person who cares for the Zoisite/Ami pairing. A few nitpicks: Zoisite *is* spelled with an 's' as he is named after an existing gemstone. Also, Raye should be Rei. The former is her name only in the Dub version.

Otherwise, a very nice 'fic. You made the pairing seem believable to me, which isn't an easy thing to do.

intriguing really ..you have a very poetic style of writing...this little one-shot is so potent..I look forward to reading more of what you write.

Very sad, yet wonderful. Nice going

Very sad, yet wonderful. Nice going

Hey I really liked your story and I would like to post it on my web site! So email me if you're interested.

Thanks

Leia