| Reviews for Career Moves |
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Modocgal 10/4/11 . chapter 8Loved it. That certainly put Johns in his place. Well done. |
Centroides 10/3/11 . chapter 8Well done. In spite of you trepidations about the Johns confrontation, you handled it very well. The story was written. |
WildClover27 10/3/11 . chapter 8I could almost - but not quite - feel sorry for Major Johns. Garrison seems to be learning a few more manipulative tricks from Actor. The boys are getting bathroom servalence down to a science. It's also nice to see Craig is learning to play well with others. I hope there is going to be more of Carole. So glad he chose the guys over his career. Hurry back. |
WildClover27 9/22/11 . chapter 7Nice to see the guys are all working together. Good view of Casino. Isn't Garrison getting to be one of them now? What's a little bit of blackmail among friends. Would love to be a fly on the wall in John's office when Craig goes after him. |
Modocgal 9/22/11 . chapter 7Johns is in for one h... heck of a surprise. Hurry back. Looking forward to Johns reaction. |
WildClover27 9/21/11 . chapter 6Nothing like a little recreational activity for stress relief. Leave it to Actor. "I think I'd prefer not to have to think just now." Snicker, snicker. All right, so what is Craig going to do about Johns? |
WildClover27 9/20/11 . chapter 5My, that apartment does get a bit of use and not the expected kind. Garrison just doesn't seem to realize how much he has picked up from the cons. Waiting to see what kind of plan the good lieutenant comes up with. |
Modocgal 9/20/11 . chapter 5That lying scoundrel Johns. Can't wait to see what the Gorillas and the girls do with him. hurry back |
WildClover27 9/19/11 . chapter 4Of course it's our guys! So what was in the safe? And what did Actor pocket? And what are they going to do with the girls now? Never mind, stupid questions. LOL Can't wait to see what they are all going to do next. |
WildClover27 9/18/11 . chapter 3This is getting interesting. Actor swearing in English? That has to be royally angry. Who caught the girls? I hope it's the guys. Hurry up with the next chapter please! |
Modocgal 9/17/11 . chapter 2loved the insight into how the cons have progressed over the last eighteen months but now what? What will Garrison choose? And how will the others react to the news? Hurry back |
WildClover27 9/17/11 . chapter 2Nice insight into Actor's character and motive for staying with the group, at the same time showing the character of the other men, Garrison included. So how do we get out of this mess? |
Modocgal 9/15/11 . chapter 1Interesting story. what will Garrison choose? Hurry back |
WildClover27 9/14/11 . chapter 1Oh,oh. This does not sound good for Garrison or the team. Craig doesn't seem to quite get it yet that he is more aligned with his cons than with his brother soldiers. It's starting to sink in though. How's he going to get out of this one? Hurry up with Part 2. |