 Pie 9/4/10 . chapter 3 Right more it's a good cliff hanger |
 Pie 9/2/10 . chapter 3 Good get more chapteres done |
 puasluoma 7/6/06 . chapter 3You cant just end it up there! |
 Gurhur 2/3/06 . chapter 3UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!please update! |
 anon 12/24/04 . chapter 3 This story was really really awsome right some more right away. |
 syunikiss 9/15/03 . chapter 3who! great move TK -
..man, i wish i had a guy like that u _ u; :sigh: i wish i had a LIFE like that o _ o' anyway, i want to know what happens so continue soon! :D |
 AutumnFyre 2/1/03 . chapter 3hey you know? this story is pretty good. you should keep updating it. i wanna read it till the very end |
 Shink28 12/30/02 . chapter 3wow great job, and this was the first fic with no davis bashing that i liked. but it needs willis bashing. tk&kari forever! |
 Laura-Grace 11/24/02 . chapter 3*has jsut finished reading "This is Willis, my boyfriend from America"*
Oh that's it. I'm not reading anymore.
Seriously. |
 Laura-Grace 11/24/02 . chapter 2AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH! EVILE CAR HORN! DON'T TELL ME IT'S WILLIS! |
 Laura-Grace 11/24/02 . chapter 1WHAT? |
 Emi 10/22/02 . chapter 1 Hey JING! Cool story! I think the chapters are a perfect length (maybe a little bit longer would help). If you want to keep the chapters that length, just write more chapters on and on and on... so that its nice and flowing, but doesn't seem like one big nonstop story! It looks like this one reviewer, TogetherAgain, is having a nervous break down that you are not writing more! Thats a compliment by the way... Keep up the good work and see at your party this Satruday! |
 Lumi 9/25/02 . chapter 4Hey, pretty nice! Good job! Continue, will ya? |
 linker 9/19/02 . chapter 4 that's bullshit. willis, kari's bf? BULL! great story by the way, but it better be a good ending. takari rocks! |
 TogetherAgain 9/7/02 . chapter 5I know I haven't been very constent with keeping up with your story but I'm back from vacation now and trying to catch up. I hope you update soon! because I can't wait for the next chapter! ttfn |