:( you should upfate!

it's a shame when they just start a story and forget it

Gawd. Those images of Light and L in my head. You portray some really complex emotions beautifully. Also, I really like the idea behind the story. What a brutal struggle XD

Amazing first chapter! Your writing style is very enticing, and the way you describe L and Light is so realistic! Keep it up! I can't wait to read more!

wow...WRITE MORE!

Wow this was intense. Mentally I was chanting "No, no, oh god no" till L toke control over the situation. I had read many rape LxLight fics on fanfiction and this has got to be the most accurate in my opinion. So are you making a sequel? If so I would definitely read it. Would it be wrong if I said I loved this story? Yes, I'm a sick fuck but I really enjoyed Domination.

This is an excellent start. I hope you'll get the next chapter up soon.

Aah!; I love you!

I was already missing something from you, because I really like the way you describe feelings and frustration. Your characters are always so... perfectly in their role, and you can feel the desperation of these moments! L proud and talking as if he was the captor, and Light so perfectly psycho that he wouldn't do something if it's not in his terms...

I mean it, I love you and I haven't hear anything about some of your original work. Have you published something yet? or do I still need to wait T_T (yeah, I think I asked this on deviant, but maybe you don't remember me at all)Just so you know, I'm a big fan of your work, and I really hope you can do something to spend my money on you _

Please, keep writing with the psichological development that you are so good with, and I'll support every single one of your creations, just let me know (because I have a life now, and I cannot do what I used to p)

Thanks and ciao!

Hmmm. Lots of awkward, jumbled paragraphs but I fully enjoyed reading this. Advice? Take your time to read things over next time :)

hehe its amazing :3 abusive sex is teh best :3

Wow! For the first time I read this scenario with the characters remaining in character! That's quite the accomplishment! I can't wait to see if Light will find a way to break L! Love the first chapter! Can't wait for more!

I wanna read Death Note again... As well as more of this fic, you captured their dynamic beautifully.

Pleas continue! I love it!