Great Job! I noticed you havent update in ages! So, I beg of you, Please Update Soon!

Fallout: New Vegas, Dead Money DLC.. Totally obvious source. Not that there's anything wrong with that given KND's referencial nature.

good story

Hey! Just typing to say that this story is really interesting, even though it seems like it's dead... that's very sad. You're a fantastic writer, and I would've loved to see where this story was going. :) Keep up the good work.

Great and weird intro - it somehow reminded me of the intro to "Riget", the Danish tv series by lars von Trier that was later remade as "Kingdom Hospital" by Steven King (try searching for "Trier kingdom Intro" on youtube). Shaping up to a good story seen from the villains perspective.

Wow, wow, what a good story! Amazing range of vocabulary, story-telling talents and...the characters are so in character! I mostly loved what book Father was reading the kids. And he thinks he spoils them :))

The thing that's been bothering me is this, though: why on earth does a guy who hates children adopt FIVE of them? Sector Z and all, I still don't see the point...

Is this story finished? I think it is, but I don't quite see and ending.

Oh, I see what you're doing here. Do you have any plans for the other three?

note-to-self: air fresheners, Febreze, condoms, and many sponges.

on a serious note... how are you so good at this?

Oh yes, a new story from Phenon! I really admire how your write about Father. So many writers just focus on their main characters and forget to portret their villains well, leaving them to be cliches and not fleshed out well. No matter who you write about, you don't just give them a skelet, but blood, flesh and skin.

I love how you do that. And you put up a new clever new for the mission (I am always in awe of those names; how do people come up with them?), and a new secret villain, so I'm pretty interested in where this will head.

Ew! Boy, Father's house is turning into Conker's Bad Fur Day! Yeah, a new story!