So a new way for Ron to help, by temporarily giving people some MMP? Novel idea, and I like it!

Now I'm curious as to what Nana would do with the power... The ideas are almost limitless...

Great story, and good luck in the contest!

Nice story,

But rushed here and there, but the picture comes across nicely.

It might have been better for Ron to tell Kim about what he did, but things worked out in the end… although, with nana in 'power' now? (not to mention she could still best Kim without any powers).

Good luck in the contest, and keep up the good writing,

reader101w