| Reviews for On Earth as it is in Heaven |
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Supernaturalxfan172 4/6/13 . chapter 7keep going :D |
Guest 2/26/13 . chapter 7 Really nice story. You really have some talent. Keep up your good work and hopefully your knee will get better. Best wishes. |
itricky 2/24/13 . chapter 7yay thanks for updating. Ive decided it would b pretty cool if Gabrial taught her how to fight/defend herself you know since im sure he is planning on leaving her (which i hope he never does) And then i hope somebody finds them. or maybe she leaves with them and it turns out to be a bad decision and he has to come save her. In my head ive decided the world is becoming like the book of eli too. Just thought id share my silly internal monologue/plot changes with you. As you can tell im pored and avoiding homework. btw love you story. not i wanna know what kind of person Audrey is. |
itricky 2/16/13 . chapter 6So I was re reading this because I love where its going and I was wondering are other people still alive. If Gabiel leaves to get supplies is Audrey safe what if she was attacked! my over active imagination has been going wild. |
QUEENOFTHEDEMONS 1/12/13 . chapter 6 HELLZ YES MOTHERFUCKERS NEW CHAPTER FINALLY |
QUEENOFTHEDEMONS 12/12/12 . chapter 1 God I hope you don't take a fucking year to update I'll fucking die garhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh update damnit! |
QUEENOFTHEDEMONS 12/3/12 . chapter 5 i love this story its so funny puts a smile on my face (not easy to do) please keep writing |
babyscardinal 11/9/12 . chapter 5I just read your story so far and I really love the banter that you have created between Gabriel and Audrey. They could be a really cute couple and the humour really helps to show how they would interact with each other and grow to love each other. I can't wait to see where you are going to take the story. They both have a lot of growing to do before they would be able to have a healthy relationship. Of course, we still don't know what others would say about the whole relationship thing which will definitely create some issues for the pair. Good stuff. |
itricky 9/22/12 . chapter 5I came back to check for an update an woop woop I got one. I actually just wound up reading the whole story again to refresh myself. Still love it hope it goes somewhere epic. So... after all that talk about Gabriels wings im think we deserve a scene with Audrey throughly exploring those wings both ockward and steemy! Hope you get a chane to update soon. Ps why dont they just switch rooms and what are they gonna eat? does he need to eat i guess he should cause he bleeds. Are they in a neahborhood if so are any survivors hiding will they attack Gabriel Im so curious and excited to know where your planning to take this story. ok I guess Ill go find some other story to read in the meantime |
cobra 2014 angel 9/11/12 . chapter 1love it please update |
Guest 8/30/12 . chapter 5 pretty good. update soon. want to see what happens between the two |
saichick-Anna-Erishkigal 8/30/12 . chapter 5I've been waiting for an update to this. I hope you finish it. I like to hear Audrey and Gabriel verbally spar. |
Sarasrii 8/25/12 . chapter 5I say take your time because if u go to fast you could easily get writers block knock on wood. |
Guest 8/24/12 . chapter 5 looks very good to me. there arent enough stories with these two. update soon |
Piper 8/23/12 . chapter 4 i really like this story please update soon |