It cutes and exciting when they were together!

There was no lemon, right?

Yeah I agree with others, I think you should make a sequel!

My best favourite pairing always

GrayLucy XD

interesting, is this a one shot or is there more?

I love it :3

WOAH! This is really good! I was expecting a steamy story that went.. well, further in depth, but your short story delivered the same erotic output! Great job, no errors or over-used phrases! I think you should continue this story.

Sequel you should make a sequel! i like this story ) kinky aren't you Gray?

My 2nd fav pairing just after LoLu! It was steamy, but... sheesh, Erza! She can be so cruel. At least it made Lucy truly want Gray. Ah... awww, she likes Natsu like a brother. Cute!

Awesome soooooooo cool but I still can't decide between NaLu GraLu or LoLu I'm now a little more on GraLu

:) Wah! Gray is a sexy beast, and Lucy is to die for sweet! Love them and love them together!

A very hot story, Eva. And you did a good job making a scene diferent of a NaLu yours. Lucy got strong feelings here...rs

Kisses,

Chrystorm

Ezra!you're such a meanie!