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| Fire Griffin 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abuselol sup |
| RR Lyrae 2007-11-01 ch 8, | abuseThe first few chapters are funny, but the later ones are MADE. OF. WIN. |
| NineTsuki-chan 2007-02-09 ch 5, | abuseHaha XD I love big red buttons I also love the pointless game where you continuously poke the big red button. Unfortunetly, I don't hang around the pokémon fandom that much (even though I do write pokémon fics sometimes) so I only have a vague clue at what the fic is about. What does AAML mean? Something with Ash and Misty? |
| Gigawolf1 2006-01-13 ch 8, | abuseMore please! |
| wi3rdo1 2006-01-11 ch 2, | abusethat is the worst hard to read |
| AinoMinako 2004-12-27 ch 1, | abuseMY EYES! THEY BURN! ...Thank you for acknowledging the horrible phenomena of bad grammar and spelling. |
| Burnt Flower 2004-07-18 ch 5, | abuseUtterly hilarious! :D Though I think chapter 5 was a little too abrupt and short, I think the whole fic is great! I especially love how you make fun of AAML cliches (even though I love the couple). Continue writing! ;) |
| BouncyBluePenguinv2 2004-06-21 ch 7, | abuseLOL! I love this. *bounces* The first three or so chapters are funny in a kind of stupid way (although they're a bit hard to read -_-) and the rest are just... great. Poor pink puffy pants, though! |
| absolkagome 2004-06-19 ch 7, | abusethis was really, really, really, really funny. I especially liked chapter 3. Keep up the good work! ^^ |
| Jillie Rose 2004-01-06 ch 6, | abuseErm...ok. Don't hurt me, please? I never did aything to puffy pants, i swear! Well, seeing as i don't know what they are, I might have without knowing. I loved this fic cos of the intentional stupidity. Much better than regular stupidity. Yay! My favourite chapters were 2 and 3. Yay! |
| Somerandomname 2004-01-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh.. my... God, that was unreal... you took EVERYTHING I hate about the damned show and fanfics (I am a fan of the game and concept by the way) rolled it all into one hideous ball and belted it with a large stick. Im gonna go put on a hat just so I can take it off to you. |
| Seveninchsprockets 2004-01-06 ch 6, anon. | abuse*Wets herself in terminal laughing fit* Hilarious. And it's true too! And unlike real crap fanfics, yours actually has a point. Phwf! XD Good job! *Leaves to wipe up the pee* Signed, Seveninchsprockets |
| Jax Malcolm 2004-01-05 ch 6, | abuseOh god. Tainted pie. I'm suddenly reminded of MintMan's poison pie giveaways on the Reality's End forums. (You don't go there, do you?) Anywho, yet another entertaining chapter. And I can't say that Ash died an unpredictable death; I'm surprised he's survived several hundred chokings on bits of sandwiches or whatnot. And, of course, your mockery of one of the typical AAML plotlines (Ash/Misty winds up having a near-death situation while Misty/Ash laments and confesses their love -- not necessarily in that order -- and gives up their life to save Ash/Misty, and blah, blah, blah) was particularly satisfying. Please keep going. I'm getting a rather big kick out of this, as you can tell. X) |
| Jax Malcolm 2004-01-01 ch 5, | abuse*clicks around FF.net because she's utterly bored* Oh look. Another addition to the collection of worse Pokémon fanfics imaginable... *clicks on it and reads the last chapter* Hey! A new way to kill Ash! *adds to the list* Yay! But seriously, I salute your creativity here. Though I'm sure we're all well aware that Ash's phenomenal stupidity will be his own downfall (or the downfall of the region of Kanto in general), I'm sure it has yet to cross someone's mind that this could be done through the use of a dilapidated building and something short of an atomic bomb. Yay for thinking outside the box! =D Anywho, this was good (yet again). Please continue to entertain us. ^_^ |
| Coffee Luv, Axe-r of MarySu... 2003-12-31 ch 3, | abuseHoly.. crud! That sucked! But it was funny in a stupid sort of way.. |