Aw! That's SO mean! Nyssa's adorable!

I thought Nyssa was going to be angry when she woke up, but it's even worse. She doesn't remember anybody! Please write more soon!

Wow, what a plot twist! Great section, loved the dialogue. Please keep writing.

I'm glad you've decided to write more of the story. I'm definitely enjoying it. The Doctor's guilt in this chapter was a nice bit of characterization. I also like the ambiguity as to whether the figures of the dead were solely the creation of Balkisia or if in some form the dead were actually there.

I'm glad to see a new chapter. Very good, interesting twist! I hope we will be seeing more in the future! :)

Great to see this story being continued. Don't stop now! :)

C.

Oh my God, what a cliffhanger! How will the Doctor save her now?

Yay! Thank you! Will more be forthcoming soon, I hope?

Good cliffhanger ending, I like it. All I can say is I wish it were longer! :)

Kudos! I'm so glad to see more of this story. Was beginning to fear it might never get continued.

The cliffhanger is delightful, but if you make me wait as long as last time I'll, I'll (fumes for a bit)... well I'll be most upset.

Oh, and you might want to turn off the "smart-quotes" (assuming you're using MSWord or similar word processor). That's usually what causes those annoying characters to replace regular quote marks, apostrophes, etc. And it turns ellipses into plain old (single) periods. Argh! (insert anti-Microsoft rant here) I only noticed them in the last 2/3 or so of the fic. Did you by any chance switch word processors?

Glad to see this one continued. Please, don't stop now. :)

Great story so far! This would have made a nice episode. Please continue!

This is great! Please write more!

Wonderful story. I like how Nyssa-centric it is. Please continue.

Wow.

I'm glad that NEVER happened to Nyssa.

I used to hate her, but now I guess I felt pity for her.

A very good fic.

Hey there! It's been a long time since you've posted any 7th Heaven stories, and I hope you will write and post some more.

Because unfortunately the 7th Heaven board has been invaded by a group of non-fans who are posting a lot of negative, and obscene non-fanfic stories.

I was hoping that you would consider writing some more 7th Heaven fanfics since the ones you had written previously were so good. I loved them and for once I would like to see good stories like yours on the first page, and crap like the current stuff on that site, pushed down to the last page.

So will you please, PLEASE write as many 7th Heaven fanfics as you can, and post them in that category. PLEASE?