Awww! How cute! I loved it!

Only thing to say:

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :)

Fluffy, fluff! I loved it! :) It was super duper cute! :) I feel all warm and fuzzy inside now!

-Payton :)

Awwww! How cute! And yay another chapter!

Aww, it was good! Don't doubt your writing skills. It was uber cute! I love that Fin wanted to feed Zoe! It's overflowing with adorableness!

-Payton :)

I loved it. You are a great writer.

Hell yeah I want another chapter lol! This was so cute. I love the name Zoe! Awww!

Did you catch my plague through the internet? Haha, sorry you were sick. But hey, you're better now. We're both better. Yaaayyy!

Anyways, I really liked it. I'm really tired, so my mind is way to "blarg" to be too nit-picky. Not that there is much to be nit-picky to be about. A few grammer things, like you said "it's half four in the morning", but hey. That's being picky!

Haha, the part about Zoe's biological father made me smile, because it reminded me of my dance teacher. :D We've had this conversation.

Dance Teacher: Your birthday is March 8th? That's the same birthday of my favorite ex-boyfriend, Mark.

Me: Who's your least favorite ex.

Dance Teacher: The father of my child.

:D

So, thank you for reminding me of Jenna. Haha! Yay! Great job, sister!

Fayth

Hehe that was too cute! I absolutly loved it! You need to write the second chapter right now, and if you don't I shall be very mad! Fin and Mel so need to have a baby together... Oh how I wish!

-Payton :)