|Reviews for Kidnapped|
| alienbeing 9/20/11 . chapter 7
Yay! I love your stories and often come back to reread them... poor old Nick, I do like him getting battered and bruised :D I wonder what that says about me? hmmm...
Anyway... review... yes, as I said I love your story, the only part that bothered me was the way you wrote the time. For example 'Thursday eight:forty in the morning' sounds kinda cluncky, I'd be tempted to reorder your sentence along the lines of, 'Twenty to nine Thursday morning...' Just a thought x
Hope to see more chapters soon :D