hahaha "the burritos didn't work out" that was fantastic! Great little story you have here!

This story is so funny. I like the phrase 'Holy deja'vu Batman'. It was sweet of Dick to go ahead and clean the house before Alfred came back. Alfred wasn't fooled one bit but I bet that he appreciated it just the same.

Oh, and the burrito joke was hilarious. I can imagine it Batman cutting it right in front of Commissioner Gordon. Oi.

lol, I loved it! FAV! XD

"Stealth — burritos are not *conducive* to stealth."

"…Oh. *OHH*. Stealth! Well. Okay, yeah. Then don't eat 'em BEFORE you go out on patrol."

Rofl! Ha, somehow I can't picture the Batman cracking one on the job, but yeah, I guess a frozen burrito would do that, lol. Anyways, this was hilarious! And it was so nice of Dick to clean up Bruce's trashed apartment - I certainly wouldn't have done it, lol. Hmm, wonder if Alfred knew?

I don't know if you're still writing, but I just came across your stories. Your stories are a lot of fun, written with heart, and ... well, the frozen burritos are hilarious! :) You do Bruce and Dick very well. The brooding, the trust, the sullen attitudes when dealing with each other at times. And the fear of Alfred :p.

Thank you for sharing these stories-and since this is a review for this story, this story in particular.

-AKung

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PS: Bruce explaning about the frozen burritos was absolutely hilarious! I laughed so much, I got tears in my eyes.

Great Story.

" take the damned pill"

"put it where your pain is"

ahahahah. great banter!

Oh man! OH my goodness... You had me laughing through out the story but there at the end *stelth* you had me bustin' a gut! I was holding my sides and tears were present.

The ending was Perfect!

OMG. This was so freakin cute and absolutely hilarious. The burrito comment had me cracking up, not good for stealth, that was awesome! I can't believe that Dick even thought for one minute that he would be able to fool Alfred. ALfred is all knowing and all powerful! Great story. It's going in my c2 archive!

That was **really** funny! Good Work!

loved it!

Ha-ha! Funny! I burst out laughing at the stealth line, had to explain it to a passing parent. :)

Nice. Lol. Extremely amusing. :P

Love it, and it's got a great ending too.

Must give plenty props. Hilarious. This cracked me up righteous! Keep 'em comin'!

That was so funny! It really entertained me! You should write more funny little pieces! It seemed really in character that Batman would be a lousy housekeeper too!