If ever a story needed updating this would be it! You've had me on the edge of my seat devouring this fic. I adore the fact that it's not sappy & fluffy but raw and realistic. I am particularly enjoying how you are slowly revealing Sharon and Andy's past relationship. Fantastic characterisation by the way, you have stayed true to the show but at the same time made them your own. I also like how unsettled the team, the Cheif in particular, are with the thought of a human Sharon Raydor. As for the plot, well it's bloody marvellous! Will Emma be returned unharmed? And if so at what cost? As I mentioned at the beginning of this review, I would LOVE to see an update!
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PiER

Hope for more soon!

PLEASE finish this tory. It is by far one of the best about Captain Raydor. I loved her character best on the show. I can so imagine her and Lt. Flynn being personally involved. Please finish.

I haven't actually read this one, I'm just hellbent on reviewing all your work.

This story is so good, I found myself leaning forward during the phone call at the end with everybody else...then I laughed at myself.
I love when a story pulls me into it.
THANK YOU so much!
Please update soon :)

Great story! Hope for more soon!

This story is really amazing. Can not wait to read more and I hope you update soon.

Please oh please write an ending to this - it's the one story I like the most on this site and surely I'm not the only one who wants to read the end? anyway: thank you very much for what you've written so far, it was AWESOME!

What a great story! I absolutely love this couple and I also love your fic.

Please continue it!

Awesome I love Raydor and Flynn interactions! Cant wait for more!

OOohh this is fantastic! I'm loving the story and all the flashbacks. Honestly at first i thought the story was gunna be about her young child getting lost at a park or something silly like that, but this story line you have is superb! I can't wait for more to come. I'm excited!

Wonderful chapter! I love the way you describe little gestures like them holding hands. So much tenderness.

Darn. I thought I was on chapter five not six!

I finally caved into reading while I was browsing to fics and oh my gosh. I must say this would be one of the most in character Raydor's I have read. Since I am a lot like Raydor in real life I completely love it -squeal-. WIth her daughter and the obsession with Sharon, Andy realizing that saving her was what brought this on in the long run. The small reassurances are nice as well, to know that she isn't completely void of letting people into her life other then her family.

Yea! I was so glad to see this chapter! I can't wait for more it should be very interesting when they meet and i wonder id she will let Andy go even though I doubt Andy will let her go by herself. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great fic. I hope everything ends up alright. Keep writing please! )