i enjoy this one, i think it's sweet and at the same time kept naru in character.

by the way, i found this a few days ago, it contains a lot of spoilers, if you want to wait until the manga is released in english not read it:

2011/08/07/the-last-journey-of-ghost-hunter-ghost- hunt-vol-12-full-spoiler-part-5/

So I never had the chance to review this and now ta-da:) you review alot of my stories -lol I only have three- this was like, extremely, effing, calm your balls AMAZING. just saying. You have a very creative writing style and I like that. Maybe we could even work on a joint story one day ?:) that would be cool. message me sometimes and we can chat !:3

Sincerely, dontplaywithlove

I liked this, it was very well written. :)

This story was really great! You wrote it really well and I was kinda hoping for Mai and Naru ending but it was good none-the-less. I hope I see more stories from you! )