Kösz a PM-ért, nem igazán volt időm/energiám mostanában review-kat írni, de tervben volt, becsszó. Most pedig túl agyilag hulla vagyok, hogy angolul írjak.

Ezeket a kis lábjegyzeteket nagyon hasznosnak találom, egy-két extra magyarázat mindig jól jön.

Ebben is van pár kedvenc, főleg olyan amit eddig nem is tudtam...

Pl: "„Not on my watch". Nothing special in English, it's a quote from the RotF movie. It's more like an in-joke for the Hungarian fans, as a similar line of the official movie prequel comic was translated as something like „Don't [step on] my wristwatch". Which sooo didn't make sense in the context."

Komolyan? Komolyan? Most ez komoly? Ilyenkor akadok ki mindig a lusta fordítókon, főleg a gyakori high schoolfőiskola fordításon, de ez már nem ide tartozik.

"On the other hand, DotM Shockwave had a pet called Driller." Amit én és a barátom kedvesen "Shockwave kukacának" hívunk. Öhöm.

"For some reason, no Megatron has ever shown a trait of a miner past." De én mégis kedvelem a bányász háttér elméletet... csak nem tudom miért.

You know, I understood the end scene of this chapter at second reading only.

He saw his otherverse self didn't he? That's good for him, he knows what NOT to become. And it explains why Primon was so surpised in the first chapter, when he saw Megatron.

I'd very much like to hug Megatron, but I think that wouldn't be good for anyone's health, would it?

Here's the review of the second chapter.

Yeah, Primon is such a softie, he has great dynamics with Megatron, sort of awesome to see Megatron Origins a bit differently.

Actually, that's the only thing I actually "know" I haven't read Shattered Glass... So if you know a source I can find it, it'd be nice. But I still know the general story behind it. So it's sort of okay.

Love the last part with the mines, because I can see you put much thought into the working in the mines part of his history. In fanfics I'm not mainly looking for action, I'm looking for character developement and if it comes with a good story, that's only a bonus. :D

First, I saw on your profile that you're Hungarian... well, I'm Hungarian too. So, I guess I'll say: Szia!

But aside from this little greeting, I'll review in English so other people can understand too, if that's alright with you. (If you answer reviews, you can write in Hungarian, I guess.)

Now on to the actual review part.

I've already read this fic once, but I HAD to come back and drop a few lines. I like SG verse, puts a nice spin on things, but it needs more stories like yours. Nice thoughful wirters, who actually have some good ideas.

Your English is very, very good, like your style, your caracterization, your storyline.

I like this first chapter, sets the mood well for the next ones and Primon is so sympathetic. I suspected from the start that he was some kind of Prime... but I'm not enough of a fan to know right off the bat.

So good job. :D

Very interesting ending

I really liked the way you described Megatron's fight in the Pit.

An interesting turn. So is this Megatron going to be based more on IDW's Megatron rather than the Shattered Glass one? I've always wanted to see a fic with THAT Megatron facing off against Optronix's Autobots. The Shattered Glass world shows everything that IDW's Megatron started the Decepticons to fight, but without Optimus' inherent goodness to change the Autobots into heroes.

If this is going to be similar to the Megatron we know, then I honestly think that this time, the Decepticons will truly prove to be the heroes they were meant to be! Looking forwards to seeing how it turns out!

Do I get some energon sweets for getting it right?

Is first Alpha Trion by any chance? Great update.