 Alex and Michiko 4/27/02 . chapter 1Alex:How in the world do you get them to stop talking! We always end up babbling for too long and THEN start the fic.
Michiko:Hey! *a brown with white belly rabbit with floppy ears lands on her head*
Alex:I had that one already. *rabbit hops off Michiko's head and onto her own* See?
Michiko:Oh. *pout*
Alex:Hey it means we're in agreement _
Michiko:True.
Alex:Anyway Kiki-chan, the flashback parts are confusing. Make it clearer which parts are the flashback by using bigger things than hypens. *giggle* hypens. I meant hyPHens. Like this:
/Emily drew in a slow breath as she sank through the floor to the waters below.../
Y'know, something like that. Much clearer.
Heero:I WOULD NEVER SLEEP WITH THAT BITCH.
Duo:_ I know you wouldn't! *tackle-glomps*
Heero:*fields it with an air of long practice* Hi there koi.
Duo:_ Hi...
Heero:*starts to do NC-17 things to Duo*
Duo:*does them back*
Michiko:*sigh* get a room.
Alex:They have one, remember!
Michiko:I know. It was just for the tradition of the thing.
Alex:Understand I do. ...I think we're done, don't you?
Michiko:Yeah. Now we'll go read my sister's poetry...*looks aprehensive*
Alex:It can't be THAT bad, can it?
Michiko:...
Alex:*sigh* Okay, no bets, don't ask, bleah.
Michiko:*nod* You'd lose.
Alex:Oh! In which case-
Michiko:-no.
Alex:*pouts* I'll bring you around.
Michiko:*sigh* Let's go. |