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Polariana 9/28/02 . chapter 1
Oooh... I like _ please continue! And thank you for the review on the Power of the Good... it's much appreciated *g*
Alex and Michiko 4/27/02 . chapter 1
Alex:How in the world do you get them to stop talking! We always end up babbling for too long and THEN start the fic.

Michiko:Hey! *a brown with white belly rabbit with floppy ears lands on her head*

Alex:I had that one already. *rabbit hops off Michiko's head and onto her own* See?

Michiko:Oh. *pout*

Alex:Hey it means we're in agreement _

Michiko:True.

Alex:Anyway Kiki-chan, the flashback parts are confusing. Make it clearer which parts are the flashback by using bigger things than hypens. *giggle* hypens. I meant hyPHens. Like this:

/Emily drew in a slow breath as she sank through the floor to the waters below.../

Y'know, something like that. Much clearer.

Heero:I WOULD NEVER SLEEP WITH THAT BITCH.

Duo:_ I know you wouldn't! *tackle-glomps*

Heero:*fields it with an air of long practice* Hi there koi.

Duo:_ Hi...

Heero:*starts to do NC-17 things to Duo*

Duo:*does them back*

Michiko:*sigh* get a room.

Alex:They have one, remember!

Michiko:I know. It was just for the tradition of the thing.

Alex:Understand I do. ...I think we're done, don't you?

Michiko:Yeah. Now we'll go read my sister's poetry...*looks aprehensive*

Alex:It can't be THAT bad, can it?

Michiko:...

Alex:*sigh* Okay, no bets, don't ask, bleah.

Michiko:*nod* You'd lose.

Alex:Oh! In which case-

Michiko:-no.

Alex:*pouts* I'll bring you around.

Michiko:*sigh* Let's go.
Relwarc 4/24/02 . chapter 1
Oooh, evil Heero.

Yeah, alternate pairings are overrated. Good ol'3x4!
Shi-no-Nezumi 4/24/02 . chapter 1
PLEASE ONEGAI POR FAVOR SHINA WANTS TA KNO WAT HAPPINS NEXT!

CHIBI DUO: OR SHE'LL SIC WUFFIE-CHAN ON EBIL KIKI 'N' HUR MUSE!

CHIBI QUATRE: DUO! LANGUEGE!

CHIBI HEERO: SHADDUP EVWYBODY! OW OMAE WO KOWOSU!
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