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Michael The-Zorch Haney
2007-12-28
ch 6,
abuseSo far rather interesting. I'm curious as to what Tarre is if she isn't a Drow, but she indeed looks like one I can understand why she'd look so "interesting" in a skimpy swimsuit since Drow women are supposed to be very beautiful. Anyway, I'm starting to see hints of a Ranma + Tarre pairing in this story already. Please continue this one.
DCWestby
2007-12-15
ch 6,
abuseI like this one.. I hope you continue it soon.
gosfan
2007-06-21
ch 6,
abuseI happened upon your story recently and found it a very good read. One thing I found interesting is that, despite Silk's wishes, Tarre seems to be a barely tolerated member of the family, often treated more like a servant than a family member, and it seems that is what Tarre considers herself to be.

It is interesting that Kasumi seems to be the only one to display any real concern for Tarre. Due to this, I could see Tarre responding to Ranma since he seems to be the first person to care for Tarre as a person.

This is the beginning of a very good story and I hope you will continue it. Thanks for writing.
Jade
2007-06-15
ch 5, anon.
abuseHey like the story though it seems to me that it has been 5 years sense you added anymore to it. Please get off your butt and finish the story.
migele
2005-06-01
ch 6,
abuseWish you would update this story again.
it's been a long while.
dragon-game
2005-05-12
ch 6,
abuseGood story.
Please continue it soon.
Rorax
2004-10-22
ch 6,
abuseVery entertaining, I like how the introduction between Ranma and Ryoga and the subsequent events changed due to Tarre's presense.

Any plans on continuing this?
Talantus
2004-05-01
ch 6,
abusehey i like your story , but i don't know, maybe you should give a little more explanation on tarre, i mean what about her fomer family?, what about her powers, exept for her strengh, will she fall in love with ranma? damn i always have question when i'm writting a rewiews... anyway, your story is really good and i really want to see it to the end so please continue it!;)
from the self-philosopher, talantus
" wherever you come from you can always find a place to call home, it just depends to you to decide where is that place"
dogbertcarroll
2004-03-16
ch 6,
abuse"Undescribeable without the selection of swear
words available in the goblin language."
"Prepare to die, Your Friend, Ryouga Hibiki,
PS. If you see my parents or sister say 'hello'
for me."
LOL. Great chapter. I want more.
dogbertcarroll
2004-03-16
ch 5,
abuseWould Ranma let a his student he was training in
the arts beat him up when he's not engaged to
her.
dogbertcarroll
2004-03-16
ch 4,
abuse"It's the same respect I give you, you old fart,"
Ranma reminded his father.
LOL. Great line. Tarre really is getting the
short end of the stick.
Why has only Kasumi changed?
The rest of the family seem the same as always.
dogbertcarroll
2004-03-16
ch 3,
abuseAnother curse?
dogbertcarroll
2004-03-16
ch 2,
abuseLOL. Love the lamp post trick!
Jay Man
2003-10-10
ch 6, anon.
abuseIt's wierd most people exaggerate Akane's cooking but in the Mange I know she has completed atleast one normal ( edible by someone other than Ryoga) meal and if she has been learning for years now she shouldn't be hopeless. I think Akane's main problem was lack of practice rather than lack of ability, plus she was overcomplicating the work. This is a great story and I hope you finish it. I like what you done with the characters though I usually prefer Ranma/Akane fics.
Phil
2002-11-15
ch 6, anon.
abuseLiked it. Thanks.
Can't see where you're headed yet though..
Please continue.
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