 dogbertcarroll 3/16/04 . chapter 2LOL. Love the lamp post trick! |
 Jay Man 10/10/03 . chapter 6 It's wierd most people exaggerate Akane's cooking but in the Mange I know she has completed atleast one normal ( edible by someone other than Ryoga) meal and if she has been learning for years now she shouldn't be hopeless. I think Akane's main problem was lack of practice rather than lack of ability, plus she was overcomplicating the work. This is a great story and I hope you finish it. I like what you done with the characters though I usually prefer Ranma/Akane fics. |
 Phil 11/15/02 . chapter 6 Liked it. Thanks.
Can't see where you're headed yet though..
Please continue. |
 Thrythlind 6/14/02 . chapter 1 My grandparents almost arranged my Dad's wedding. So I think you could say that I know it's existant. |
 Joe Fenton 6/13/02 . chapter 5 This is a really nice variation of Cinderella. Very creative. The only two problems I see are first - that truly American notion that arranged marriages are a thing of the past when they are not... even in America! Second, although I, like many others, like the seeming Ranma / Tarre pairing, only Soun shows the proper attitude toward that. As long as even a single blood relation lives and is physically able, an adopted relation cannot be considered for a family obligation. Tarre hasn't a shot unless the three Tendo girls become incapable of taking the engagement (say, they run out and join a brothal), or Ranma leaves his family and he and Tarre elope. Maybe that'll happen. |
 taxzombie 6/11/02 . chapter 5Bravo! I say again Bravo! I've just spent a most enjoyable evening catching up on my reading and part of that reading was The Fourth Tendo.
An excellent piece of work from word one. I too am hoping for a Tarre/Ranma matchup, but we'll have to wait and see. What ever you do I'm sure it will be good. Truly a pleasure to read.
I have a guess as to what species Tarre is. I'm looking forward to to finding out if my conclusion is correct or not. |
 jwjester 5/6/02 . chapter 4 Really like the story, very origonal. Go writing to. Please continue. |
 Final-Fan 5/6/02 . chapter 4This is developing nicely. Highly original! |
 Final-Fan 4/27/02 . chapter 3 I've been overusing the word "interesting" in my reviews, so I'm not going to write it here-d'oh!
Seriously though, good stuff. |
 Renyard Al Fiona 4/25/02 . chapter 1Which character was this? Niiiiiice. I can really see that you did your homework: it was tragic: and it was damn near close to canon, too. Great work! |
 thrythlind 4/24/02 . chapter 1 The fic was "A Different Art"
Chapter 2...near the beginning of the chapter |
 Jaywild1 4/24/02 . chapter 1 This is really good hope there's a Ranma/Tarre Pairing and whoever suggested the Soun/Tarre pairing she supposed his daughter so them getting together is kinda sickening. |
 Final-Fan 4/24/02 . chapter 1 I really wanted to leave a comment, but then I got reviewer's block. Sorry. |
 Dan Inverse 4/24/02 . chapter 1Hmmm...I wonder if you could put up a tarre/Soun pairing since I think she could help soun overcome his pain? _ (just an idea) |
 Kathleen 4/24/02 . chapter 1 What fic was this from? Glad you're writing again. |