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dogbertcarroll 3/16/04 . chapter 2
LOL. Love the lamp post trick!
Jay Man 10/10/03 . chapter 6
It's wierd most people exaggerate Akane's cooking but in the Mange I know she has completed atleast one normal ( edible by someone other than Ryoga) meal and if she has been learning for years now she shouldn't be hopeless. I think Akane's main problem was lack of practice rather than lack of ability, plus she was overcomplicating the work. This is a great story and I hope you finish it. I like what you done with the characters though I usually prefer Ranma/Akane fics.
Phil 11/15/02 . chapter 6
Liked it. Thanks.

Can't see where you're headed yet though..

Please continue.
Thrythlind 6/14/02 . chapter 1
My grandparents almost arranged my Dad's wedding. So I think you could say that I know it's existant.
Joe Fenton 6/13/02 . chapter 5
This is a really nice variation of Cinderella. Very creative. The only two problems I see are first - that truly American notion that arranged marriages are a thing of the past when they are not... even in America! Second, although I, like many others, like the seeming Ranma / Tarre pairing, only Soun shows the proper attitude toward that. As long as even a single blood relation lives and is physically able, an adopted relation cannot be considered for a family obligation. Tarre hasn't a shot unless the three Tendo girls become incapable of taking the engagement (say, they run out and join a brothal), or Ranma leaves his family and he and Tarre elope. Maybe that'll happen.
taxzombie 6/11/02 . chapter 5
Bravo! I say again Bravo! I've just spent a most enjoyable evening catching up on my reading and part of that reading was The Fourth Tendo.

An excellent piece of work from word one. I too am hoping for a Tarre/Ranma matchup, but we'll have to wait and see. What ever you do I'm sure it will be good. Truly a pleasure to read.

I have a guess as to what species Tarre is. I'm looking forward to to finding out if my conclusion is correct or not.
jwjester 5/6/02 . chapter 4
Really like the story, very origonal. Go writing to. Please continue.
Final-Fan 5/6/02 . chapter 4
This is developing nicely. Highly original!
Final-Fan 4/27/02 . chapter 3
I've been overusing the word "interesting" in my reviews, so I'm not going to write it here-d'oh!

Seriously though, good stuff.
Renyard Al Fiona 4/25/02 . chapter 1
Which character was this? Niiiiiice. I can really see that you did your homework: it was tragic: and it was damn near close to canon, too. Great work!
thrythlind 4/24/02 . chapter 1
The fic was "A Different Art"

Chapter 2...near the beginning of the chapter
Jaywild1 4/24/02 . chapter 1
This is really good hope there's a Ranma/Tarre Pairing and whoever suggested the Soun/Tarre pairing she supposed his daughter so them getting together is kinda sickening.
Final-Fan 4/24/02 . chapter 1
I really wanted to leave a comment, but then I got reviewer's block. Sorry.
Dan Inverse 4/24/02 . chapter 1
Hmmm...I wonder if you could put up a tarre/Soun pairing since I think she could help soun overcome his pain? _ (just an idea)
Kathleen 4/24/02 . chapter 1
What fic was this from? Glad you're writing again.
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