This is an amazing fanfic. Awesome! Love it! I'm so so sorry to hear about what happened to your sister. I don't know what i would do with mine...

I really enjoyed chapter 3 and 4. I am glad to see the kind of hero Vaneria can and could be over time.

(And on another note, I grumbled under my breathe with the same thoughts when I first tired the Ice Orb Saga, its a killer)

I can't wait to see what will happen when she goes on the other Orb quests. Would be interesting to see when she does the Wind Orb Saga; which side will she take? Only you can tell us...

Hey I am writing my own dragon fable fanfic can I borrow Vaneria and Skysong as characters?

Sure. I'd love to see what she would try to do to get out of being a hero. Why only 4 reviews? This is an amazing story! I suppose that's because it's in AdventureQuest fanfiction but still! I hope you keep up the good work!

Nice, I am really liking this. And I should think you have Valernia take part in some chain quests and see what the results are XD

It's humorous, it flows well, it uses an often-ignored character's point of view, it's got good grammar and spelling, the sentence construction is higher than a third grader's, and the concept is interesting.

Yes, my eyes AREN'T deceiving me- a good fanfic!

Please continue, it really is a delight to read. :3

Short chapter is short, but promising too. I haven't read many fics about Zhoom before (nor do I know an awful lot about him but the basic bits you touched upon here) but I think this would be a good time to learn. It's difficult for me to give critique after just the first short chapter, so churn out a second and I might be able to help some more. Still, I'm liking where this is going so far, and your descriptions of people and events are very good. Good job :)

Awesome story. Please continue, I want to see what happens next!