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Ranmaleopard 2/1/12 . chapter 1
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
AshK 5/18/10 . chapter 10
Nice ending to an excellent story! Good work!
Wonderbee31 5/18/10 . chapter 10
Doggone, I'd forgotten all about this fic for awhile, but glad to see you finish it, and it looks like Ranma/Riker just can't escape the romantic entanglements no matter what the era, LOL.
James Birdsong 10/19/08 . chapter 9
Well done .
James Birdsong 10/19/08 . chapter 8
Lovely twist with Ryouga and Genko
James Birdsong 10/19/08 . chapter 7
Perfect chapter I do insist although Nodoka's sinister plan.. those things.. scare me greatly _V
James Birdsong 10/19/08 . chapter 6
Pretty nice mwahahaha.

I hope Deanna wins him.
James Birdsong 10/19/08 . chapter 5
I believe you meant his father not he father.
James Birdsong 10/19/08 . chapter 4
Excellent
James Birdsong 10/19/08 . chapter 3
Wow _
James Birdsong 10/19/08 . chapter 2
Pretty neato. I'm glad Ukyo's decendant is there (if that is what she is) but how Ryouga could still be alive I have no idea though it seems implied he hasn't aged.
James Birdsong 10/19/08 . chapter 1
That is so cool O_O
Lerris 10/11/05 . chapter 9
Your writing seems to be improving. Most of the chapters were on the shorter side. You seem to have mostly sidelined the new fiancees in favor of Deanna. The Ranma has to beat Hibiki thing seemed to come out of nowhere though... Good luck with this...
Lerris 10/11/05 . chapter 6
Actually its the first time I remember seeing Akane was Troi's ancestor, which would also make Ryoga Troi's ancestor. Maybe I missed it. At any rate, that is creepy. I suppose I sort of guessed that to be the case with what Genma did before, but wasn't sure.

As to reviews with name calling, if they are anonymous, you can delete them. If they are patently offensive and non anoymous you can report them I suppose. I gave up dealing with anonymous reviews some time ago.
Lerris 10/11/05 . chapter 4
In the beginning of this chapter there is a scene that is something like, "but unfortunately nodoka hadn't fed" or some such. That paragraph worked by itself more or less, but then you go back and go over the feeding in detail. I'm not sure you want to say what happens before it happens..

The other thing to note is the tons of Ranma 1/2 characters being tossed into the mix. Ryoga, because he NEVER lets go a grudge. Kuonji decendents because Genma was honorable of all things. Kuno's because, well we have no idea why and now some kind of arrangement that is convienently with Troy's family. Then of course there is a new Amazon as a result of eating the food.

I'm not saying that any of this is necessarily bad, but in general the more implausible or cliche the plot the weaker your overall story is...

For that matter a plot whole that comes to mind, is if the springs work like you said, then you could almost have Genma dunk a monkey in there and lock it with the ladle, or was there something special going on?

At any rate, I hate to rant in reviews, but I just thought some things worth pointing out... Good luck with this..
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