I don't understand.
Tell me!
NOW!
Any way good story but how are they alive when they were dead...
I don't get it!

Oh, this is a sad one - but oh so stunning. Needed to read it a couple of times to get it all, though. I really would like to know what Lestrade thinks.

HO- LY SHIZ! O.O

It's like, 12:54am right now, and with my fear of the dark... OMG. You just totally scared the shiz out of me. That. Was. Epic. Wow. I'm, like totally mind-blown and freaked out at the same time. O.O

THIS STORY IS SO BLODDY AMAZING!

This one is so brilliant indeed! Your writing style is very beautiful and your story telling is so attractive with that big turn at the end of the story that I hold my breath all the way I 'epilogue' of this work is gracefully written and heart-tearing at the same time.

Actually I wonder if you may allow me to translate it into chinese so that more chinese fans could read this work I reeeeally love:) Your rights as the auther will be fully respected and no profits are going to be made. Please tell me if I am allowed. Many thx and have a nice day!

This was... very well written.

It touches the heart just so.

I knew it was coming. Of course, with a name like 'Epilogue' and John shielding Sherlock from the truth. But just because I knew it was coming, it doesn't mean that I didn't cry. This was really powerful, deep writing.

Oh fudge, it's the Others and the Woman in Black all over again... argh, curse you and your tormentingly-good angst writing. I really liked this story, it's much darker (obviously) but still in character. In all your stories, and in this one in particular, you're able to show such raw emotion, yet while keeping a certain sweetness and youthfulness to John and Sherlock's relationship. It's really quite amazing, and even my description doesn't do it any justice, but it's incredible. Never stop writing, you have quite a gift.

oh no :(

Oh. My. God.
I'm crying. This was beautiful. The twist ending!
I love you for this. I'm probably going to dream about this tonight.
I love you. I can die happy now.
Thank-you. So much. The world thanks you.

[crying]

Aaaaggghhhh, House of Leaves has got to be my favorite book in the world thus far. The first book I ever felt the urge to defile by writing endless notes in the already-jam-packed margins. :) Gatiss's Crooked House is also on my list of books-that-must-be-read. And on that note, wowwie, this was fantastic. Sad, and terrifying, and heart-wrenching, but then again many great stories are. Were I alone, I might be weeping. I love your writing style. Very Danielewski-esque, in some ways. And though I guessed the ending ages before it came, it was no less lovely and sweet and devastating. The sadist in me wants to see Lestrade's reaction when he finds the bodies. :/

Ahh, boys, boys. Those two will indeed live out their afterlives together in peace. Methinks in real MoffTiss-canon life Sherlock would have easily pulled the lie from John's words/face/hands/hairstyle/whateverthefuck just because he's fucking SHERLOCK HOLMES, but in your defense he was drugged, and out of it, and browsing the edges of panic and desolation, and it was dark, and it's your goddamn story, so it's entirely plausible that John could have managed to sneak a lie past him just that once. Besides, John's never lied to him before, and Sherlock trusts him, so why indeed would he feel the need to entertain any suspicions that John would lie to him then? Regardless.

I think my favorite bit was Sherlock's total freakout when John was shot, because I think it was very realistic. All of his emotions would indeed have churned out as if a dam had broken, I think, because if you were shot in the 'heart', wouldn't yours? Particularly if you were the type of person who did not much favor emotional expression, and who let your 'heart' take the heat, so to speak, and express them for you? I'm rambling now, and likely making absolutely no sense, but to sum it all up, this was fantastic, I think I love you, aaaand I'm going to go crawl on a hole now and die. Or possibly find some crime scenes and giggle at them. Who knows. :) I look forward to reading more of your work!

The-Ugly-Turtleduckling

Omg... I had a feeling, but it was still a punch in the chest there at the end... must say there are tears in my eyes... :(

Oh...my god. That was brilliant. Despite your writing having been really good before (having gone through quite a few of your sherlock fics in order) there has been a notable improvement in your story telling. Again, great job!

Oh! What happened exactly? Did they really die?

Love this but I'm still rather confused...is this a crossover and I missed it?