nicely ritten and good plot but u write more chapters and maybe u can get more revies.! i only speak the truth. mwa hahahah

oh my gawd...! this is how i wanted it to be...please dont stop and keep up the good work.! :)

Hello. :)

Mabye you’re interested to play in a forbidden game RPG! It’s quite new and I’m one of the admins, I’m called Jenny in the game. ;) We’re still loocking for the main caracters, like Summer, Michael, Zach.. It would be cool, if you come to visit us! Here the link: .de/

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That was really good :]

how come you haven't updated in so long ?

Please update soon !

uh, is it just me, or is julian acting way too cruel for a guy in love? this isn't romantic at all!

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I like the way you carried on from the first book. I think thats a great idea! It's very different from other stories ive read (in a good way

I really like your story! But when are there going to be more chapters?

Very interesting, please continue soon.

how do i be nice about this? well...um...the writing WAS good, keep it up, but i must admit that a few MINOR details were a BIT off...ahem...a few chapters back Julian was being a bit pushy, believe me, he LOVES her with a bloody burning hot sizzling firey passion, he wouldn't do that, he wouldnt use her and just do what he wants...i know she's his, but he wouldnt take advantage of her still. ok...this chapter...the rose was not red as the Erlking gave her previously, it was silver. and also shadow men do not sleep...if you read the trilogy in its origonal context, you will see that Julian watched Jenny NON-STOP! that means never stopping!

i know i've been a bit harsh, and im sorry, lying just cramps my style, so in complete truth...I LOVE THE PLOT!

*Walks With Starz*

oh i hav to say this is a delicious story to read

if u dont update soon

i will kill u and steal julian from u forever

post soon, i love it

Too short, some errors, good idea, 7/10.

Oh! Oh! A Jenny/Julian fic! Love those... (sits down and waits patiently) Come on! Update!

Julain's mean in this story. I like when he's mean. He's so much more in chatacter. Anyway, this story is good. Sometimes it's a little rushed so make sure to keep it slow and realistic. But apart from that, it's good, interesting, and enjoyable to read.