|Reviews for Unforgiven|
| CrowX 3/23/13 . chapter 1
I like it, but would even more if you continued :-). I always was wondering how Harry in the books could continue and stay sane without suicidal thoughts. Your story is much more realistic. Would like to read more.
Just a minor detail: you should use spellcheck with word or open office. Because there are a lot of typos, like "finnaly" instead of "finally" and so on. I saw that you're not a native speaker (I'm neither), so maybe a betareader would help. You can search here at ff net for it.
But great stories and I like how you write!
| Kenjo 9/10/12 . chapter 1
LOve it! Though I'm confused on how he's alive... Update soon please!
| dnEehT 8/10/12 . chapter 1
Uwaaah! Scary! Plz.. Continue wirh this.
| kshadow 3/7/12 . chapter 1
Is there going to be a continuation? Because I'd totally read it.
| Kharneth666 9/19/11 . chapter 1
i know that this story is complete, but i would still love to see a continuation of this
| tansy1354 9/19/11 . chapter 1
Well done. Brutal but honest, especially the tombstone. Thank you for sharing
| kirallie 9/19/11 . chapter 1
Okay so how'd he come back? Not surprised Harry did that