This is lovely - I like the idea of him always leaving her. I also like the cuteness at the beginning, and I think Hector/Andromache is one of the cutest pairings in the Iliad. Just one slight issue is the childbirth bit - maybe you could split it into a couple more paragraphs so it's a bit more readable? That is literally all I have to criticize, though, so you can definitely congratulate yourself on a job well done! :)

thank you for sharing this... this is my favorite couple from both iliad and odyssey :)