Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it! Very sweet!

Aww! I loved it. I think they should have done the episode with how it happened rather just telling it, you know? Anyways, good job, it was really great!

MS07

awwww so cute! loved it!

yay so glad to see someone wrote a story about shelia and don i've been waiting to see one. i thought it was very sweet. don is a great guy. i can see why shelia loves him. hope you write more about these 2

Great story! What a nice glimpse into the start of the Kowalski clan...well written and very sweet. I loved it! Hope you'll write more ATW fics soon!

Aaaawwwwwwwwww :)) that was the sweetest, most adorable thing ever. And so believable too!

You wrote this very well, and I hope to see more equally well written fics from you :)

Awe so cute! More please!

You're first ATW story, yay; can't wait to read it and see how it goes. :D

Review...

"Just like his mother." Sheila felt the blush creep across her cheeks. "Oh, stop…I must look awful." Don shook his head." - right there I would have keep the lines but changed up the descriptive part of it, like have Don's actions with his statements and Sheila's with hers; rest of it - line wise is good. :) "It's okay, Daddy's gotcha." - aww, have to love Don Sr. interactions with his kids; a very cute story, this is such a fan favorite story of their hook up already over night you can't help but love it. I expect more Don/Sheila stories to follow after this, but this was a nice take on what happened. Can't wait to read more ATW stuff you might do including that first Team Danny story which the fandom needs. Hahaha. :) Nice, good story to cut your writing teeth on...welcome to the world of Against The Wall story writing! :D

thank you for writing! and for filling in the beginning to the story we learned about last night. I like your version of it :) hopefully you will write many more ATW ff soon!