great story and you cracked me up..."Take pictures" that was brilliant and so Chin!

I agree with Chin...when Steve really loses it, take pictures! That should provide endless amounts of entertainment. Hilarious story. Loved the end with Danno wanting to shoot Steve, or at least have Kono shoot Steve since she has Danno's gun. Thanks for the story.

Great story.

I adore this story. So like Steve to lose his temper like that. And I adore the doctor for standing up to him.

(I think it must have been very cold when you wrote this, because there's a "br" after every sentence.)

This was great! I'm not sure if you know this, but you had 'br' at the end of every line and it was really distracting! You may want to delete those :) But I loved this story; it had me laughing out loud!

That was good and funny. To even try to picture these people not letting Steve have his way and taking his phone was funny. Then Chin trying to calm all down and kono watching it all. Thank God for the doctor..lol And Danny wanting his gun to shoot Steve...really good. Sue

Too funny. Nicely done!

I really enjoyed reading this. It had humor, anxiety and was really well written.

ha ha ha! Poor Steve! Though I pity the poor nurse! Imagine having to deal with an irate McGarrett! Great story!

Funny! Never seen a story where a non-criminal actually tried to defy Steve. You could smell the fear coming from the male nurse once sumo security arrived!

I hope this helps your writer's block with "Our Devoured Minds" Such an amazing chapter, dying to read more!