A very intense chapter. What a sweet, sad idea, to have Bella's sight restored just long enough for her to see Edward's face, then have him restore her blindness as he saves her. This is quite a story.

Great chapter. James comes across as more sinister here than in the original.

I don't know what I was expecting to read in this chapter. After all this is your tale and I'm hanging on for the ride. I must say that I was totally entranced. Felt the excitement and enjoyed the expectation. Thank you for making my day. :)

Lovely. :)

May I just repeat that...what a place to end! So pleased you're continuing. Thank you. And now on to the next chapter ...

Beautifully written. Thank you for continuing. All the arguments for stopping here are valid. (some authors never know when to stop.). Your talent and imagination make it an easy choice, for me, to keep reading. Thank you again. :)

Wow. What more can I say? :)

Now I'm up to date. What a place to originally leave this story! I must have been indirectly affected by James's madness.

I have fallen in love with this story all over again. Thank you. :)

I had lost this story in my huge list of WIP. When I noticed I had missed several chapters in your up dates, I thought I'd better reread snippets to refresh my memory. All I could remember was how much I loved the tale. Well the snippets have turned into full chapters and my total enjoyment of this story has return. Thank you both for bringing this to the attention of the hungry and unwashed! Lol. ;). Not really unwashed. :p

If they have to have danger please make it palatable to the feeble readers like me that can't take too much angst! This chapter was too short, longer ones please (1000's and 1000's and 1000's of words please xxx

I just found this story today and LOVE it! Please update sooooooooon!M

Great chapter. I had a feeling they were going to chicago. I surprised my husband with a trip many years ago. We were living in NYC (pre 9/11). I packed and got him in a cab, he did not know where we were going. We got to the airport (the old Eastern Airlines at LGA). I made him sit across from the gate and had him take his glasses off. Then I made him put his walkman earphones on. The gate attendent cooperated with me and let me check us in and hand over the tickets. We were going skiing for the weekend in Montreal (his parents friends had a ski lodge there that I pre-arranged with them). After all the announcements were made and the flight took off I let him take off the headphones. He was so confused listening to many people around us speaking French, he thought I was taking him to France for a weekend (but he also did not think that the airlines we were on flew there). We had a great weekend and luckily for us there were no dangerous vampires in our future (just money sucking children)!
Thanks for translating, I'm enjoying the story, but am a little nervous now for what is going to happen.

"But you did. You always knew that something was missing, even if you didn't know exactly was it was. Today you can know. I was simply incomplete. I was waiting for her."

Oh, damn. Bella's not the only one crying.

Good side trip. He needed that, he just didn't know it.