Great job!

Upload soon! It's really good!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! Oh, and can you PLEASE make Fi and Homer get together?!

Loved it!

OMG you cant just leave the book like that! It was amazing! Just like John Marsden (possibly better) the only parts i was concerned about was how Ellie, Homer and Gavin got the guns to shoot the soldiers. Other than that it was fantastic. You definitely need to write more

OMG its amazing, you should write more, this book should definably be published!

This was a really good chapter, can't wait to read more.

Was so excited when I got the email telling me the next chapter for this was up! I think you're doing a great job continuing the series. Love Homer and his big head!

Keep it up!

Vicky

Wow, wow, wow, a brilliantly written chapter my friend. I hope there is more to come soon. You got every one perfectly into character. Enjoying the story.

You write a mean action scene my friend-I thought I was actually reading another of the books for a few, brief moments; well done. I can't wait to get over to the next chapter and read that (my heart is thumping a mile a minute).

Is it me or does it seem trouble is never far behind Ellie and Homer-just a thought. Love the action. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I like Homer being back in the picture and finding out he's still doing what he dos best-irritating the hell out of the enemy. Another well written chapter.

I'm Johnny-come-late to the story but I think it was a perfect chapter. You showed us how things were in the apartment and how everything works in the morning and all. Keep up the good writing.

I thought the piece was pretty good. Well written. I think you had Lee and Ellie nailed perfectly.

WOW! This was really great. I can't wait to read the rest of this story. Thank-you