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| The Embedded Shame 2008-07-23 ch 1, | abuseWell ... It sucks that you didn't write ENOUGH of it, nor described it. So maybe this is kinda confusing? Is that only me? I would have liked the fact if you would have talked more about the main charac. more, described in which ways they (the main chrac. + patrick bateman) alike. Are you planning to continue it? I hope so. It had me talking, i'll give you that. |
| AnnaMollyPR 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abusethat was a really nice story..it's nice to see that even someone like the crazy patrick bateman can find someone to care about..too bad it was only a oneshot.. |
| AngelLauren 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was good. I enjoyed seeing that other side of Bateman. 4/5 people - write more AP fanfics! xx |
| QuietlyAlive 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseI love the ending. :) |
| Elen 2005-09-28 ch 1, | abuseVery good! but it's moving a little too fast forward though, but it's alright! Do more! |
| bannonluke 2003-07-29 ch 1, | abuseExcellent fan fiction, which actually shows Patrick in a sympathetic light very well. Very emotional as well. It's nice to see some fan fiction of this up. |
| Tyler Bateman Esq 2003-02-25 ch 1, | abuseWell, well, well, I finally find an American Psycho story. I wrote one a long time ago, but took it down due to lack of response. I may have to put it up now. Then, maybe we can get a category up. The story was good. I can see the charector of Jean doing what she did. I assume it's Jean you're writing about. Anyway, keep it up. Yours sincerely Tyler P. Bateman |