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The Embedded Shame
2008-07-23
ch 1,
abuseWell ...
It sucks that you didn't write ENOUGH of it, nor described it. So maybe this is kinda confusing? Is that only me? I would have liked the fact if you would have talked more about the main charac. more, described in which ways they (the main chrac. + patrick bateman) alike.
Are you planning to continue it? I hope so.
It had me talking, i'll give you that.
AnnaMollyPR
2008-07-16
ch 1,
abusethat was a really nice story..it's nice to see that even someone like the crazy patrick bateman can find someone to care about..too bad it was only a oneshot..
AngelLauren
2008-01-16
ch 1,
abuseWow, that was good. I enjoyed seeing that other side of Bateman.

4/5

people - write more AP fanfics!

xx
QuietlyAlive
2007-11-12
ch 1,
abuseI love the ending. :)
Elen
2005-09-28
ch 1,
abuseVery good! but it's moving a little too fast forward though, but it's alright! Do more!
bannonluke
2003-07-29
ch 1,
abuseExcellent fan fiction, which actually shows Patrick in a sympathetic light very well. Very emotional as well. It's nice to see some fan fiction of this up.
Tyler Bateman Esq
2003-02-25
ch 1,
abuseWell, well, well, I finally find an American Psycho story. I wrote one a long time ago, but took it down due to lack of response. I may have to put it up now. Then, maybe we can get a category up.

The story was good. I can see the charector of Jean doing what she did. I assume it's Jean you're writing about. Anyway, keep it up.

Yours sincerely

Tyler P. Bateman
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