Cool story. It really gets you wondering what's going to happen next. You also have the characters personalities as they were in the original story. I applaude you. Can't wait till the next chapter. :)

Please update. I lice how you're doing R aven's character. :)

This is a interesting take on the after part for the series. I like where you are going, and annette for a OC is fun. I can not wait to see what mischief she will inact on the crew.

I think you did a good job with Edgar this chapter.

Wow. You're writing style is really progressing. :) And the attention to characters other than the pairing makes it much more believable. Also, I AM SO GLAD YOU UPDATED! Yay. :D This story is really great. I cant wait for the next chapter. (Btw the same problem with updating continuously, but I too REFUSE to drop Any of my stories). Great chapter, keep it up. :D

Please update! This is crazy good! Its one of the best hakushaku to Yousei fanfics out there. PLEASE don't quit writing this!

Please update. Its been way too long.

Please update soon. This is great. :)

Yay! A Kelpie x Lydia story. Thanks for updating, i think your doing a good job so far )

i love kelpie and lydia together so please don't stop this story

When are you going to update... lass. Lol

OMG sooooo sweet! Keep on writing! I 3 Earl and Fairy! Thx for these chapters! If you could, i would love more ;)

I was really happy that I could actually find a kelpie and Lydia story. Most people just do Edgar or raven with lydia. But I really like kelpie.

I like this story so far. It has a nice feel to it's words. It makes me happy when I read it. Anyway I really hope you update soon! I'm looking forward to this story a lot! ＼(o)／

An interesting chapter.

I liked the way you showed the relationship between Lydia and Kelpie.

I look forward to the continuation.

.AWESOME! (o)

lydia and kelpie are so kawaii together!0w0

awesome story

YOU MUST UPDATE MORE! o