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Sarah1281
2008-12-09 . chapter 1
"“So, you are telling me that people are interested in knowing what happens in these shows before the real story? Even when they know how it’s going to end?” She asked.

“Sure, they do it all the time on television now days,” he told her.

“Well, that’s just plain stupid,” she remarked. “Who would watch something like that?”

The entire room was completely silent for a few seconds. Each person just looked out into nothingness with a blank expression."

Lol, that's great. That's EXACTLY what Smallville is.
Mechans
2004-07-24 . chapter 9
Woah..o.o;...This story was..exciting at some parts...And very sad..But...o.o;...I loved it! ^.^...Hm...Now only if someone would write one where he is somehow sent to our universe..xD..That would be weird and cool.
HemisH
2004-02-24 . chapter 9
Wow! Read this in one sitting.
I agree with the religion, was a bit too much but otherwise this was one hell of a good story. Even made me sad. Words can be powerful, and like other authors I read here(only read smallville so far) you know how to use them.
Keep up the good work.
reed
2004-01-25 . chapter 9
gr8! mor!
Bluie Twilight Star
2003-10-04 . chapter 1
Just to let you all know, Something Wicked This Way Comes is actaully a book and was made into a movie. It is a classic story and the title from it comes froma line in Macbeth. In the play the witches do say that line and it is used for the title of the book and the movie by the same name. The Charmed episode, Something Wiccan this way comes from this quote also. It is a very famous line and, in my opinion, very appropriate as a title for this piece of fan fiction. I like it so far, the only thing that I have to say about it is that the weird code symbol things are still here on my computer where there are suppost to be quotes. Is that suppost to happen?
-Bluie
Rebel Goddess
2003-05-31 . chapter 9
I feel really bad about this because you sent me such a sweet e-mail but I think I'd better say it: the religious overtones need to be undertones or they rather overpower the story. Most of this was fantastic - creepy, scary, cute, funny, sweet and angsty by turns, but I think you either need to tone down the religious side or give it more meaning within the story because as it stands, it feels a bit strange.

OK, now that's out of the way and you're probably hating me for writing this, but I have to say it really was good. The ending even had that 'Argh! Run for the hills!' X-factor. Please write something new now. Enjoying this a lot. RG. PS - that 'the end?' had better have the answer 'NO!' because otherwise I'm going to be very annoyed. Fix it for them please. There's only so much wickedness poor Malcolm can take before taking up arms against his sea of troubles (sorry about the mangled quotations, hopefully you know what I mean.) One last thing - please give poor CK a break before he breaks. Great story.
DarkAngel35
2002-09-18 . chapter 9
So I'm sitting in the dark reading your story on my laptop and I see that Lionel is going to get a second chance and that's so sweet, then you make me practically jump out of my skin!! Anywayz, amazing story you wrote here, all the religious references and just everything... it all fits, you're an amazing writer =)
Energeezer
2002-08-27 . chapter 9
OMG.....you had me there for so many moments with that song... Your a terrific writer, gave me plenty of heart attacks. I still wished you hadn't ended it that way...I would've loved it even more if Lana and Clark got together.
Hedi
2002-06-09 . chapter 9
OMG! That was one good story! I loved it to bits! It's an absoloute classic for me! I can't believe that a story this good is out there for the public! You've done yourself and your country a great service! Lex and Clark are really tight (No Clex? What a surprise!), I sure hope that you'll try out a sequel for this!
Dante de Troy
2002-05-18 . chapter 9
Good stuff, I enjoyed the story thoroughly, especially the thinly-masked digs at the 60's Batman TV series.

My only criticism is that there might be a bit too much retelling at the beginning of each chapter. I noticed that a good amount of the text is characters discussing, with each other, events that they all know occured. You might want to rethink that approach on the next story.

All in all, a good read. Keep on writing.
glerk
2002-05-14 . chapter 9
Ack, evils! Someone beat up Alex? Please?? Setting yourself up for another sequel here, m'dear? *G*
Phaze
2002-05-13 . chapter 9
Authors Note: The tittle 'Something Wicked This Ways Comes' was taken directly from the 1983 Ray Bradbury movie of the same name, and not a Charmed episode which was most likely a play on the name of Mr. Bradbury's movie. Thank you for the interst.
Tainted Muse
2002-05-12 . chapter 9
OH. MY. GOD!!!!!
You had me in tears with Clark saying goodbye to Lex. You HAVE to write another one...this is too good
w/e
2002-05-12 . chapter 1
ok.... dude you stole the title from an episode of charmed!!!! "Something wicked this way comes" is the title of the first episode of Charmed, "Something Wicca this way comes" only you changed "Wicca" to "Wicked". you shouldn't do that or my friend will beat the ** outta you. Capiesh??? good.

w/e
Cassandra Kent
2002-05-12 . chapter 9
OH my gosh...Excellent story. I smell another sequal..LOL I can't wait to find out what happens to everyone involved. Thanks for a well action packed story that held me glued to my computer waiting for another chapter. You are a great writer and I love reading your stories.

Cassie
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