pum-pum-flying! AHAHAHAHAHAH! so awesome!

no offense, but you are messed up. In a good way. You probably should have used less sex in the story, but still good anyways. I just wished you hadn't used Ox. That guys freaks me out...

one tip: not exactly secret when the pairing is listed at the top "soul & maka - reviews", etc.

O.M.G is it bad that i laughed a bit i mean im deffinatly not saying that this is bad i mean i really like it * not in that way* but its like one by one there pimping maka out and it just... you never imagine maka acting like that... ever!

keep writeing its so ur talent

Yeah, Soul was a total idiot for believing that Maka didn't love him. Who can't love Blair, even if she's causing trouble? Maka having sex with so many guys in such a short amomunt of time made it seem kinda weak when Soul and her had sex. I dunno. That's what made the story and Soul was being so dense and unwilling to do it with her that they really didn't have much choice, but they could've, y'know, like slowed down a little bit so she had time to recollect herself, rest or something. I could see her with everyone but Ox, it just felt awkward.

Was it your intention to make us roll our eyes and laugh our asses off when she was doing it with Black*Star? Cause if it was, you did a pretty awesome job.

Woah that has got to be the longest reveiw I've ever written and it's still going. LOL

Anyways, I loved it. Instant favorite.

...hahahahahaha irony.

SOUL YOU ARE A FREAKING IDIOT.

Nice work, though, Kilik. Good job.

Ox is such a baby.

Blair's just jealous cuz Maka's not really a whore.

I hate to point this out, but Maka's about to become the group's whore.

Why is it everytime I go looking for something that has nothing to do with aphrodisiacs or sex it's EXACTLY WHAT I FIND? HMMMMMM?

I must keep reading though. It sounds so awesome! Just like Communication Breakdown! Must...read...

OMFG, this is the most epic lemon story ever! XD It has all the Spartoi boyxMaka pairings for people to read, and it's initially SoMa! XD Fucking damn love it!

Pffffttt HAHAHAHAHAAH!

Must have been awkward facing everyone the next day XD!

I wish yhou could have made a chapter like that :(

But I still enjoyed it!

That...Was just unnatural. And poor stupid, resigned Soul.

That was interesting. Yeah...I do find it irritating that Soul was stupid and Blair waited so long to tell him. But I guess the ending was kind of good. I don't blame her for being so pissed though.