Loving this so far! You have the characters to a tee, and carrie and tommy are so cute together I can actually picture this happening love it! :)

Awesome seven chapters

This one was better than your other chapters just because Carrie is finally with a friend.

Keep it up!

"Finally" is right; the two are idiots.

Keep writing, the fight was cool, but Carrie could've used her powers.

Wow, you write fast!

Glad Tommy showed up, kinda missed the guy.

Alright, a fight scene! This oughta be good!

Hell Yeah! The bitch is DEAD!

I'm favoriting!

Now it's gettin' good!

Gotta wonder, though; why would Carrie be attracted to a dude who beats his girlfriend?

That wasn't too long at all.

I love the drama that you put into this. I can't wait to see how Chris reacts when Billy dumps her. (At least I hope he dumps her.)

Give this one a happy ending too; I always feel bad for Carrie in these things.

Waitin' on the third! Can't wait!

This is great so far! I want more!

Mainly becuase I don't get how Billy and Carrie would get together.