i must say i liked the irony that obi-wan and bruck were the two kids that were seen by qui-gon and noley. That was well done.

I really liked this. I enjoyed how Qui-Gon interacted emotionally with his three padawans, even if he wasn't aware of it. :)

Very interesting, Qui-Gon could see or sense Obi-Wan's anger and yet not Xanatos. It seems like Qui-Gon cant see it when it's hidden. Or doesn't want to recognise it. He should look deeply into the Force and then he would see what a great knight Obi-Wan will be. I enjoyed this look into the early meeting of Jinn and Kenobi.

This is an interesting time period - before Qui-Gon's doldrums and before Xan's fall.

"Never be a knight," indeed! Yoda and we know better.