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| Reviews for Demonic Problems |
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   Akuma-Heika 5/2/12 . chapter 1Interesting...writing is a little immature at times but it is far from bad. Hope to read more chapters soon. |
| Guest 3/21/12 . chapter 1 please add more chapters |
| Guest 1/25/12 . chapter 1 please add more chapters |
| Black Wolf XIII 1/1/12 . chapter 1 This si good please continue |
| Our Guild 9/24/11 . chapter 1 Utah:Hello fellow DKD writer. All I can say is that it's extreemly fast paced. You should slow it down a bit. MAybe you could learn a bit by reading To Settle a Debt by Takhissis for perspective ideas or you could read Edward Elric and the Order of the Pheonix by Aideen Rathnait or The Mind of a Broken Father for writing style. I hope you keep writing so we can see improvement. |
