|Reviews for Father Of Mine|
| tinkfan14 4/28/12 . chapter 18
OMG puleeze update quickly! I LOVE this story so far and were just getting into action! The Incredibles is my favorite Pixar movie! omg, i never expected this! Sydrome is alive... dundundun... Its action time.
by the way im reading this on my new Nintendo 3DS and im exiting out of Google to play a DS game. And guess what its called? The Incredibles: Rise of the Underminer! (im so obsessed) :)
| tinkfan14 4/28/12 . chapter 2
suspense. oohhh. first thing i thought when i read those last two sentences. i cant believe this. watch out dash!
| tinkfan14 4/28/12 . chapter 1
wow, its hard to find stories that have a lot of Mirage in it! ppl seem to always neglect her. this story sounds like itsngonna be good!
| 5th Dimension 4/12/12 . chapter 1
Very interesting concept. I'd almost forgotten Mirage.
| near4EVER 3/31/12 . chapter 18
I like it... Good story
| Andy Nonomous 2/25/12 . chapter 17
Kyler shuld like take her jacket off when they're signing Syndrome out, so he gets caught, then the family shows up
| Samtastic V2.0 2/23/12 . chapter 17
What confused me is:
Why didn't Dash just use his speed to get the knife and knock Buddy out in the blink of an eye? and
Why didn't they just quickly leave after Buddy released Kyler?
Suggestion: Have the family show up right as Syndrome is being signed out, and have Mr. Incredible know something is up.
Update soon :)
| Samtastic V2.0 1/16/12 . chapter 15
Just an idea:
What if Kyler would have kill Syndrome, as she realizes he's too evil to be kept alive?
I think it would be an interesting choice.
Update soon :)
| Rhonda Petrie 1/15/12 . chapter 15
I can't believe it; what a horrible man. Syndrome is willing to kill his own daughter right in front of Dash. I just hope the two can get out of there alive. And it's sad that Mirage killed herself all because of him. What a waste of a life. But this is still very good so far. I like to see what happens next.
| Wolvie'sBiggestFan 1/15/12 . chapter 15
What is wrong with you? Buddy's using his own daughter as a human sheild?
| Samtastic V2.0 1/12/12 . chapter 14
This chapter was good.
I figured this story would be all about fighting Kyler, but I'm glad you decided not to do what I'm sure a lot of people were expecting.
I only have 1 concern: I feel like, it's just gonna be boring and a little sad from here. Maybe have a Super situation pop up, or something, to keep it interesting.
Update Soon :)
| KaylahDemi 1/5/12 . chapter 13
aww this chapter is so sad. I almost cried at the part where she visiteed her mothers grave because it reminded me of when I visited my nephew's grave.
| Samtastic V2.0 1/1/12 . chapter 12
What if Kyler's mom (Mirage, right?) had lost it? Ya know, kinda crazy, and they're visiting her at a mental hospital?
Update soon :)
| Elcten8.81 12/31/11 . chapter 12
I think what will happen is the Parr's get kidnapped again and whilst in captivity violet goes into labor! Just a thought lol xx
| Angel Lovely Rose 12/28/11 . chapter 11
Ooo..the suspence!please update soon!