OMG puleeze update quickly! I LOVE this story so far and were just getting into action! The Incredibles is my favorite Pixar movie! omg, i never expected this! Sydrome is alive... dundundun... Its action time.

by the way im reading this on my new Nintendo 3DS and im exiting out of Google to play a DS game. And guess what its called? The Incredibles: Rise of the Underminer! (im so obsessed) :)

suspense. oohhh. first thing i thought when i read those last two sentences. i cant believe this. watch out dash!

wow, its hard to find stories that have a lot of Mirage in it! ppl seem to always neglect her. this story sounds like itsngonna be good!

Very interesting concept. I'd almost forgotten Mirage.

I like it... Good story

Kyler shuld like take her jacket off when they're signing Syndrome out, so he gets caught, then the family shows up

What confused me is:

Why didn't Dash just use his speed to get the knife and knock Buddy out in the blink of an eye? and

Why didn't they just quickly leave after Buddy released Kyler?

Suggestion: Have the family show up right as Syndrome is being signed out, and have Mr. Incredible know something is up.

Update soon :)

Good chapter.

Just an idea:

What if Kyler would have kill Syndrome, as she realizes he's too evil to be kept alive?

I think it would be an interesting choice.

Update soon :)

I can't believe it; what a horrible man. Syndrome is willing to kill his own daughter right in front of Dash. I just hope the two can get out of there alive. And it's sad that Mirage killed herself all because of him. What a waste of a life. But this is still very good so far. I like to see what happens next.

What is wrong with you? Buddy's using his own daughter as a human sheild?

This chapter was good.

I figured this story would be all about fighting Kyler, but I'm glad you decided not to do what I'm sure a lot of people were expecting.

I only have 1 concern: I feel like, it's just gonna be boring and a little sad from here. Maybe have a Super situation pop up, or something, to keep it interesting.

Update Soon :)

aww this chapter is so sad. I almost cried at the part where she visiteed her mothers grave because it reminded me of when I visited my nephew's grave.

Great chapter.

What if Kyler's mom (Mirage, right?) had lost it? Ya know, kinda crazy, and they're visiting her at a mental hospital?

Update soon :)

I think what will happen is the Parr's get kidnapped again and whilst in captivity violet goes into labor! Just a thought lol xx

Ooo..the suspence!please update soon!