|Reviews for Addiction Written in Skin|
| MusicalLover17 4/14/13 . chapter 2
loved the chapter. cant wait to read more
| Guest 3/5/13 . chapter 2
| Guest 12/12/12 . chapter 2
Please, please, please, please, please, please, please continue this! This story is... perfection multiplied by a thousand. If you don't continue this, I might die. [insert Rachel Berry 'The Way We Were' quote here]. Actually, I think I might actually die physically. This story is like a drug to me. An intriguing, amazingly-written, dark, sexy drug. I need more of it... now.
So, in conclusion, please update soon. It will save a puppy's life. )or kitty, whichever you like more...)
| Guest 11/25/12 . chapter 2
why won't you update already?!
| Tatiana Ruiz 9/14/12 . chapter 2
Please continue this fanfic! It is captivating and you have left me wanting more, so please just continue updating! :)
| brighteyescoldheart 5/2/12 . chapter 2
I think you should update this. I'm curious to see where you go with it.
| Silver Millenium SD 4/20/12 . chapter 2
| Lady Elena Bella Petrova 4/9/12 . chapter 2
Love this story and chapter so far! can't wait to read more of this story later!
| Doctor Clementine Who 4/2/12 . chapter 2
When are you going to update? :)
| Erin Adrienne 1/2/12 . chapter 2
Um is the word love strong enough? Seriously though, I'm very intrigued. Please continue!
| Gleekovcourse 12/24/11 . chapter 2
I like it. It's different, both like, and unlike glee. Update please.
| desolee 11/27/11 . chapter 2
I am definitely intrigued, moar please :)
| alittlegleek 11/6/11 . chapter 1
Please update soon! I'm hooked!
| Analaa 11/5/11 . chapter 2
Well i believe Jesse is Jekyl and Hyde in the flesh :) Keep up the good work!
| michemistic 11/3/11 . chapter 2
Thank you so much! When I saw the update I put my hand on my mouth and squealed in delighted shock! Onto part 3 my beloved! As you know, I have no shame and am willing to beg!
Jesse hitting Rachel made me gasp! I was so pissed off at him! No Jesse! You do not hit people, especially women, especially YOUR woman!
“Well, at least until she begins to bore him like all the others previously. Although he couldn't see that happening for a while, she was already turning out to be very entertaining.” Hate to break it to you, but Rachel is too vivacious to be boring-she’s actually the complete opposite. If anything she has too much personality and character! This part irked me because I HATE the thought of Jesse, “replacing” Rachel, but we know that she’s already too special (e‘special’ly to him) and by spending time with her, he’ll discover that he’s falling for her. Falling hard.
Speaking of falling for her, I honestly believe Jesse is the one that craves and needs her more. The fact that he felt their connection before they even met speaks volumes. While Rachel is starting to feel it too, I think Jesse will be the one to fall first and deep. It will be complicated because of the Master/Sex-Slave power dynamic. Jesse LOVES his power and dominance, even Rachel reluctantly finds it, “intoxicating.” With this type of story, I LOVE the darkness and sensuality.
Jesse MIGHT command Rachel to reciprocate … and she won’t, she’ll fight him (and herself). He will want and need ALL of her, but as she pointed out, “he would never ever touch her mind or her heart.” And THIS would (knowingly or unknowingly) be her revenge/a taste of his own medicine.
YES! You literally had Jesse chasing (more like sauntering slowly) after Rachel! The suspense of the cat and mouse/hunter and prey, brushing her spine, carrying her bridal style, just everything! *body explodes*
I wonder how playing with Rachel to break her will turn out. Scary but that’s what makes it so intriguing.
Having them just sitting together is already so seductive, this dark, erotic story is in itself addicting. Making him look at her and stating his claim? Something must be wrong with me because I can’t get enough of this possessive Jesse, I crave more and I’m REVELING in it!
Please put me out of my misery and let’s see chapter 3 (and 4, 5, 6, etc.)!