This story is really interesting. I hope you might consider updating it.

Excellent. Usually with chapters this short no one would give it a thought, and there were some grammar problems, but this fic really looks into the mind of Takeru quite well. Please continue, but try to make the chapters at least 1000 words(Or at least longer then your profile), so most people would actually give this fic a chance, so they can see how good this is.

Not bad, not bad at all. Keep on writing this fic, it certainly has potential.

Great beginning! You got Takeru's emotions sorted out.

Well written. a pretty good introduction. you got me attention, now i want to read more! let's get the story started!

O.K cool story! But you actually have to WRITE another chapter! O.K and one more thing PLEASE OH PLEASE make longer chapters! Oh yeah is this going to be a kaiyako? Or maybe a kenyako? I don't know but PLEASE answer me! Thanks in advance! Oh yeah your a really good writer and so you HAVE to keep writing the story!

Pretty cool so far, just becaurful how you treat Dai (JK)... nah, it's all good, you are a really talented writer! NEway, cool chap, i hope you get over your block soon, i'll be waiting for more!

oo... Mystical! I usually am not a big fan of Digimon but this sounds interesting! You must continue!

Hey Lunarian. For the Pata 1/2! story, I'm thinking that Pata is still working out her feelings. That's all I'm going for in this turn of events. I plan for the triangle after Pata considers them as just friends. Patakeru, Takari are still my main objectives, I'm just taking the scenic route. See ya!

wow, that is Intriguing, you should definately continue with this! i will read it for sure

Yamenai? That's all I get? Mou. . .Keep going keep going-lovely lovely, I was positively -enraptured- by that little tidbit there!

It was not a bad one but don't you think it was a little too short?

I would say you are on the wright way. Can't wait to see more.