|Reviews for Alphonse's Plan|
| PokemonFreak90 9/27/11 . chapter 2
Um, actually Ed HAS said that he likes Winry! Remember at the very end of FMA? Before he left to go out west, Ed said he'd give her half his life if she would give half of hers. If something's not going to exactly follow the plot of FMA, please state so at the start of a story and say what's different from it.
And you have A LOT of spelling mistakes so far.
A pretty good story, but fix your errors, check your words, keep it in context, and maybe get a beta reader, if need be.
| Formidable Rain 9/27/11 . chapter 2
Aw! It looks cute! Moar please? :3
| awesomenaruto 9/27/11 . chapter 2
Yay! Update soon! That is a demand not a request! haha lol! just kidding, but seriously please update soon!
| Gisel0202 9/23/11 . chapter 1
Nice chapter . Update Soon!
| awesomenaruto 9/22/11 . chapter 1
aww! thanks for mentioning me and for advertising me and my story!