That was epic

Jacob mustve learned his moves from chuck norris :p

Comment, lol. Jk teehee.. (storys awsome :p)

Hey! I don't diss your taste! I just want to help out as much as I can! Sometimes FanFics are a scary place...Just kidding! The community is very nice once you get to know it! :P My only crituiqe is to improve on your summary, write it so that it interest your viewers. The first chapter is a good spot to mention that this is your first fic if you want! Otherwise, this is fantastic! Keep it up! :D

Omg this is great! (heehee..)