|Reviews for The Mole: Crazy Calamities|
| Light Speed508 4/15/13 . chapter 30
(Eeeeeevil computer...) Poor Peach, but at least she got to see Toadsworth. *Ignores everyone else entirely* Okay, I went back and reread the earlier chapters and noticed some things I didn't see before. My suspicions of Toadette still linger, but now I'm more convinced that the Mole is Bombette. Why, you ask? I just reread a couple of the earlier clues and did a little comparison ;P.
| Koopa 4/4/13 . chapter 30
Lol, Peach dropped her camera, apparently Kooper did have a little suspicious moment. It's like a gut feeling but I think he's the Mole. For now I don't think I should reveal the clue.
| Dimentio's Epic Girlfriend 4/3/13 . chapter 29
Aw, my clever mind trick didn't work...oh well. :P
| Toady 4/3/13 . chapter 30
YUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUS YOU FINALLY UPDATED ! *shot*
So glad you didn't give up, I usually tend to lose my motivation toward the middle of stories myself, so I hoped you didn't experience the same thing !
So Peach's already lost her part while Kooper and Shilo both lost a round. Thinking about it, Kooper IS suspicious, but I'm staying on Iggy. Shilo's more or less cleared in my eyes, just like Peach. I must commend you for making everything so confusing, I'm really trying hard to figure out who the Mole is, to no avail. *shot*
Good luck for your next chapter !
| Anonymous 3/1/13 . chapter 25
Isn't it called 3 Questions?
| Anonymous 3/1/13 . chapter 19
Iggy nodded, "Yeah. Fun day. Kinda glad there was no challenge though. No money the Mole could sabotage, no money for the pot, no money to STRESS over!"
And no money for the pot is something the mole would love. Is Iggy the Mole?
| Anonymous 2/28/13 . chapter 3
OH! Silly me, I thought Shilo was a real Mario character.. DX
Luigi/Ruiji's execution really was upsetting. Shame he was 'Traitor Aboard''s winner, but a 'Crazy Calamities' first victim. You will be missed. Good luck to who remains!
| Moley Koopa 10/17/12 . chapter 30
I think I caught a clue... Isn't the mole Kooper? (Isn't he a scardy cat in this fic?)
1st: Kooper (I would love him to be the mole!)
2nd: Shilo (Isn't that you? Also, Axel's execution made me think that he(you?) is the mole.)
3rd: Toadette (She's a bit weird, I doubt that she looked into Kooper's journal lol)
4th: Iggy (He was played by Peach, so why did Starlow get executed but not him?)
5th: Peach (Her outfit in the mountain mission)
6th: Bombette (I never suspected her, AT ALL)
| Dimentio's Epic Girlfriend 10/7/12 . chapter 30
plz. im not smart. i can't figure this out. who is the mole?
| Princess Toady 10/1/12 . chapter 29
Toadette is pretty smart, I didn't realize the players couldn't exactly lose the challenge since there was no time limit, I'd like to see her reach the final for that reason. :p
I also found suspicious the way her thoughts were given to us... A little like you were giving us her strategy, to be an obvious Mole at the beginning of the game and to later become less suspicious so that the others will think it was only a player's strategy, not the Mole's.
I'm almost sure she lied about taking a peek at Kooper's journal, but I can't prove it. I sincerely doubt she would have given Peach this much information too. I also can't help but smile everytime I see the sentence 'Toadette smirked evilly'. For some reason I'm trying to imagine how she would look and that makes me laugh. XD
I'm actually wondering what it was that Peach dropped... Was it her phone or her charger ? If what Toadette said is right, she could have wasted time in the process... Hmmm...
And... What the Beep was that ?!
Olden : "The tourist group was told of this event, it was publicly announced that the Mole would be here, and they wanted to come. This is more of a public thing."
Haha ! I voted for Iggy on the poll and this line increases my suspicions about him.
1. Iggy (above everyone else by a large margin)
5. Kooper/Peach (I don't suspect them)
Good luck for your next chapter.
| Princess Toady 10/1/12 . chapter 28
I already like the minigames you showed us in this chapter. Shilo's looks like the one from Mario Party One and Two in which you had to push your opponents off the ring with your ball.
Bombette's minigame seems fun too and I like the way she plays it, pushing her opponent into the fire. XD
Kooper's minigame reminds me of Noki's task in my own story. Oh the pain of describing how to cook stuff... Lawl !
I also like the fact that your players can call each other thanks to their cell phones, it's a pretty unique idea as most of the time they cannot do such a thing in other stories, or even in the real game show. I'm kind of wondering if they actually need the phones for the challenge... That could be an interesting twist. I don't think I've noticed any suspicious behavior in this chapter.
| Light Speed508 9/21/12 . chapter 29
Hmm. This... No clues to my theory at all. Maybe Peach got a 1 or a exemption? That would really help. And I'm still hunting you mole, I'LL DESTROY YOU FOR GETTING RID OF STARLOW!
| Traveler 9/21/12 . chapter 28
Wow! This is like, a really good story! I still don't know who the Mole is, but I'm keeping an open mind! I have a few suspects at this point, and can't wait for the update!
I've liked most of the challegnges, though at first, some of the challenges were really stupid, like the parachute. No offense, but that's a little easy. I do, on the other hand, like the current episode's challenges, and it was kinda a weird spot to put the 3 Questions game! I mean, I haven't even seen it before, abnd I seen a lot of Mole Games out there! Also, I like the current challenge. It's kinda confusing, but I think I get it. I'm pretty darn sure, someone is going to fail epically. You seem like that kinda person. But I don't really know what else is gonig to happen. I mean, the Mole, who at the moment, I think is either Iggy, or Bombette, will probably fail, but not too much. I mean, that would just be WAY too suspicious.
I'm really hoping the challenge is a success, but not too much of one. I really like most of the characters, and I really am liking whomever the Mole is. SO for now my list is:
Can't wait for an update!
| Light Speed508 9/18/12 . chapter 28
FINALLY! Somebody makes sense! THANK YOU SHILO, FOR GROWING WARY OF TOADETTE! But, if starting to lean towards Bombette as well.
| Princess Toady 9/17/12 . chapter 27
I'm just over analyzing things. XD
I'm trying to put myself in your place and ask myself "what would I want to do with the story and characters ?" If I were you, I'd obviously keep the Mole until the end (no brainer) as well as the people who look suspicious, and I don't think I'm on the wrong track considering the executions that have happened thus far. The most innocent ones were executed one after another and from the remaining six, I think Peach is a legitimate player. Why would she go through the challenge and add 40 000 coins by herself in one challenge and then try to stay in a cage for six hours, being unable to see her loved one ? It doesn't make sense at all if she were the Mole. XD So if she's not the Mole, she's an innocent player, and if she's innocent, she'll get sooner or later.
Kooper... He's the one I like the least of all the remaining characters. It's not too say that he's bad... Well, he kind of got on my nerves with his whining. It just sounded pitiful and that's the kind of person I want to slap. I like bitchy characters, but not whiny ones. XD He obviously could be the Mole as he's had some opportunities to sabotage the group and not sound too suspicious, that's why I put him after Peach.
Shilo, Iggy, Bombette and Toadette all play the Mole very well. I especially liked Toadette in this chapter, she was so funny, making a scene because of nothing. :p She plays for herself, and I think it's a cunning strategy to get rid of Kooper. I like cunning people. That's why I believe she'll be in the final four for sure.
I still haven't made this list of sabotages that I said I would do before... Don't know if I'll be able to pull it off since some things were pretty obscure. Oh well, we'll just have to see !
Sorry for my lateness, I'm finally back to University so I'm a little busy.