Wow. You're doing an amazing job of setting this up. Your sentences are beautiful, the dialogue seems real, and I can actually believe these things of Jag and Jaina, both. You've really thought about them, haven't you?

GOod story but I wish you'd start the Jaina/Jag romance next chapter at least.

Where did everyone learn about Jag iv'e never heard of him?

Wow! This is really good! I can't wait until the next chapter!

good start, can't wait for the next chapter... :D

Hmm? Can't wait until the Jag/Jaina romance starts? soon, I hope.

Oh man I'm loving this. I like how detailed you've made Jag, and the interaction between him and Wedge.

I also like how you wrote the relationship between Jag and his father.

Very well done, write more soon!

This is the best Jag-fic I've read yet, and I can't wait to see the rest of it. You are going to finish, right?