I have no idea why but I absolutely love this fic, it just strikes me as interesting and unusual but in a different way. Anyway great story so far, see yah in the next chapter.

I like how you put a more human perspective of Clovis and Odysseus; most of the royal family is portrayed as snobs in the anime, so it's interesting to see another side to them. I also like how you're able to convey the emotions of the characters without too many words. Update soon!

japaneserockergirl

Cute, yet abnoxious. I like him.

Okey, so, OMC fics usually blow. Actually, OC of any gender tends to suck but I always check them out anyway, just to mock them. But this guy actually seems pretty decent. He's find of an asshole which is really not something you see in a lot of OMC fics. Usually their angels who can do no wrong.

So yeh. I'm surprised and impressed.

I'm really getting into your character. I like how you make him compare everything to art, reflecting his interests, as well as the bits of dark humor you throw in. Update soon!

japaneserockergirl

I have to say that this is pretty interesting so far; your original character sounds very realistic and believable, as well as someone to sympathsize with, the latter giving this fic bonus points. I especially like that you're exploring a new direction as far as this fandom goes; it shows creativity. Keep writing!

japaneserockergirl

I don't usually read OC fics, but the writing in this is great, definitely not the same old "Mary Sue with a Geass" type crap you always see in this fandom.

There were a few bits that could use further proof reading, but overall it's great.

Really looking forward to more, it's refreshing to see the royal family explored. :)

This is fantastic, much like my own writing style. 3

It's funny because one of my dearly beloved OCs shares a name with yours, only the spelling differs slightly.

I appreciate that you took the time to recreate a view of the Royal Family, and I like how Odysseus and Clovis clearly play important roles already. I'm personally fascinated by Britannia itself, and for that reason, I believe I'm going to enjoy poking in on this story from time to time.

I look forward to the next installment, or whatever you have planned