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| Polish 2008-02-02 ch 1,  | abuseWow... I feel like I just watched this in an anime! This is really good! I really loved it! I mean wow, its just I dont know its making me at a loss for words. Its just so beautiful. ( I loved the anime) Will you return to to finish? |
| the toltec 2007-02-26 ch 23, anon. | abusehey bojack listen when do you plan on coming out with your World Game”: Sequel to “If You’d Just Say You Love Me”/ “The Hybrid’s Song. sound realy interesting please write back soon. oh yeah and dont stop writing "dont give up the fight". |
| rose wood 2006-07-07 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis second chapter of "If You'd Just Say You Love Me" is a big disappointment, compared to the other previous chapter. The ending was unrealistic and my comment on adding paragraphs and more deatils has been justified. Kino's actions and words were too dramatic, as was her forgiveness. Mutio would not blush so much or giggle. |
| rose wood 2006-07-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseYour fanfiction is beautiful! I am a big fan of Mutio's and Hayami's relationship. But, now for the constructive criticism. You should make your paragraphs (which you had none) bigger. You need to add in more deatil and character development. |
| capnhands 2006-04-08 ch 23, anon. | abuseI'm really sad to see the story end finally after all these years. But I will so be looking foward to the sequel in the future. I know it will be an awsome sequel cause your a great writer. |
| Duo 2006-04-04 ch 23, anon. | abusegreat ending, and good luck on your future projects. |
| QReaper 2006-04-04 ch 23, | abuseOh...Gothic, grand tour,world game, and big game. I am looking forward to these, they sound epic. By the way, whenever you would like me to look over anything that you deem me worthy of seeing, give me an e-mail. I do remember the message you sent me but I'm not to sure if you got the reply...anywho,drop me a line. Happy endings all around! :D |
| KuroKitsune-chan 2006-04-04 ch 23, | abuseYes to the Future! LUVED THE WHOLE THING EVERYTHING! |
| Onigumo 2006-04-04 ch 23, | abuseAhaw, that's cute. |
| lizzibat the saiyan prince 2006-04-01 ch 1, anon. | abusehey does anyone remember that son or poem whatever it was from blue submarine6 that the mutant cat girl cept reciting? |
| KuroKitsune-chan 2006-03-25 ch 22, | abuseHayami didn't die! Emma is safe! MUTIO WAS SPOTTED! What a beautiful chapter! |
| QReaper 2006-03-24 ch 22, | abuseFinally, a Mutio sighting! Guess that about raps it up, huh? Sad, yet I have a feeling that the story isn't over just yet (wink wink nudge nudge). Still loving the story, looking forward to the epilouge. 'Till next time, have a good 'un! -Q |
| Dark_Raven008912 2006-03-24 ch 22, anon. | abuseCan you update soon... |
| the toltec 2006-03-24 ch 22, anon. | abusehey man i read the chapter and its excellent as always , though im kind of sad to see that it has to end. but no worries this isnt the end for hayami and mutio not for me anyway, in the supersuit chronicles il pick it up where your story left off . and bye the way thanks for mentioning my name and promoting my story , and i have to say that you have become a very valuable co-writer to the story and thus makes it partially your story as well. ps just to let you know im a guy not a girl just trying to set you straight on my gendur. |
| Zeek72 2006-03-23 ch 22, | abuseI've played those games, just don't understand why you put it in. |