GREAT BLUE SUB FIC!

Well, I know this is a little late and I just recently watched Blue Submarine no 6 however after seeing Muteo I completely fell in love with the fish type girl and decided to find some fan fiction.

The story is the good example of the path the creators should have taken with Muteo and Hayami relationship, however for some strange reason seeing Muteo taken by that creature that molested her in the film did anger me a bit.

However reading the story offered a sense of correction, however it did go a little too fast, I like the Idea of Hayami living by the sea and wanting Muteo but for her to just appear out of the blue was a little too unrealistic, Maybe having him working and doing normal things that will accidentally or slowly bring Muteo into the frame will be more suitable.

Then the relationship between them happened a little too fast also and seemed unrealistic as well however it was nice and romantic.

However the story creation and descriptions are very well done and I congratulate you on this story..

I only hope the makers of this very unique anime will decide to produce more and I hope they didn’t blow their budget on four single episodes. They have a gem with Muteo.

Shane

I love this story by the way. I was thinking if any one has ever thought of making a Blue Submarine No. 6/Inuyasha pairing being Hayami/Kagome and/or Hayami/Kagome/Mutio or Hayami/Kagome/Kino or others.

Wow... I feel like I just watched this in an anime! This is really good! I really loved it! I mean wow, its just I dont know its making me at a loss for words. Its just so beautiful. ( I loved the anime) Will you return to to finish?

hey bojack listen when do you plan on coming out with your

World Game”: Sequel to “If You’d Just Say You Love Me”/ “The Hybrid’s Song. sound realy interesting please write back soon.

oh yeah and dont stop writing "dont give up the fight".

This second chapter of "If You'd Just Say You Love Me" is a big disappointment, compared to the other previous chapter. The ending was unrealistic and my comment on adding paragraphs and more deatils has been justified. Kino's actions and words were too dramatic, as was her forgiveness.

Mutio would not blush so much or giggle.

Your fanfiction is beautiful! I am a big fan of Mutio's and Hayami's relationship.

But, now for the constructive criticism. You should make your paragraphs (which you had none) bigger. You need to add in more deatil and character development.

I'm really sad to see the story end finally after all these years. But I will so be looking foward to the sequel in the future. I know it will be an awsome sequel cause your a great writer.

great ending, and good luck on your future projects.

Oh...Gothic, grand tour,world game, and big game. I am looking forward to these, they sound epic. By the way, whenever you would like me to look over anything that you deem me worthy of seeing, give me an e-mail. I do remember the message you sent me but I'm not to sure if you got the reply...anywho,drop me a line. Happy endings all around! :D

Yes to the Future! LUVED THE WHOLE THING EVERYTHING!

Ahaw, that's cute.

hey does anyone remember that son or poem whatever it was from blue submarine6 that the mutant cat girl cept reciting?

Hayami didn't die! Emma is safe! MUTIO WAS SPOTTED! What a beautiful chapter!

Finally, a Mutio sighting! Guess that about raps it up, huh? Sad, yet I have a feeling that the story isn't over just yet (wink wink nudge nudge). Still loving the story, looking forward to the epilouge. 'Till next time, have a good 'un!

-Q