Have you notice that Gaius and Caius from Final Fantasy XIII-2 have the same name but the first name is different? I wonder if they have a connection?

You should pay actual attention in English and Writing classes. Honestly your paragraphing, grammar, and punctuation is worse than a 6yr old's.

It is a good story so far, but maybe you should format your story so it can be easier to read?

Oh... I'm disappointed. This could have been so much better.

No leia?

Is this the first Xillia fic in FF? I have a feeling that you get the characters quite right but may need to improve on paragraphing. Looking forward to next chaps :)