naaaaaaah! cryyyyyyiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing! so SAD! and HAPPY! and... AMAZING! KAWAII!

At first I thought the end was going to be tragic.
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I'm so glad it wasn't :{D

Luv it but I would love it more if u made at least one more chapter pretty please :)

Interesting story...

I love this story so much! It had humor, romance, and a little drama. I love your writing style, you did an amazing job!

SUPER JUNIOR HITACHIIN INCEST -HUGS YOU- I WOULD NEVER EVER EVER THOUGHT THIS COMBINATION WILL APPEAR IN MY LIFE.

I generally like the story, but I disagree with how you wrote Haruhi. She would never act that way; she would more understanding of their relationship or not even care if anything. So I think she was ooc, but I understand the story needs an antagonist. Either way good story. I liked it. :3

awww i like this its sweet

so kaoru's parents don't know (sigh)poor kao

aawww cute

aawwww i want a big purple dog like that TT

what would kaoru's mom say about hikaru

eeeekkkkk they love each other

i don't care if it is short i still liked it -

ooohhhh interested

This is. The best. Mothafucking hika/kao story. I. Have. Ever. Read. Seriously, this was awesome. An inspired plotline, a heartwarming story, sexy at times. Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. As for criticism, there are a few mechanical errors ("mourning" vs. "morning"). Also, "lime" usually refers to oral sex and/or uh... 'manual' sex. :P

Despite that, this was excellent, an enjoyable read. :)