This was rather unique in that you didn't actually write dialogue for it. I think that worked here, letting us imagine the kinds of things they'd say without explicitly writing them out.

"Sapphire to emerald."

I like the remise of this story, but I admit I disagree with the storytelling format, which is
decidedly more passive than I'm used to from you. I'd love to see this story developed more fully, with dialogue and detail, but it's cute for what it is.

What a wonderful, rich, satisfying, romp!

Your handling of Robin's character/obsession/shortcomings was spot-on, as was the way he regretted his actions and his internal helplessness in the face of his screw-up.

Starfire's essential goodness just POURS out of your words! I hurt for the poor girl, who was up against a wall not of her own making, a wall she couldn't breach by herself.

Favoriting.

This was amazing. :)

This was adorable, I loved it.

It was very interesting to read it without them actually talking and in this present tense, but I think that's what made it so good

Hahaa. *Nosebleed* Love'd the oneshot. You are amazing! I'm falling even more in love with strafire and Robin!

I felt like this didnt get nearly as much credit as it deserved, so im going to review again- i read this over and over. its brilliant beyond belief! keep writing!(please) LOL

"Every twist, every turn, it's all designed to take her breath away...dance for her..." awhh man. brilliant!

Very cute story, I enjoyed it! However, this has me puzzled: who is Gretchen?

Can't wait to enter the competition!

Keep writing,

teentitansrobstar

u r still my most favorite writer ! i luv this!

I love your writing. Can't get enough of it. You really should go work for DC, kick out who ever is in charge and take over.

diving. was not expecting that, but i like it. it does seem to be something Robin would do because it is so similar to his acrobatic upbringing. it actually surprised me though that you didnt use any dialogue, though i like it

Where do I sign up? Because I have this thing I accidentally just wrote.

MNBP

ooooohh its so sweet! and i love diving! i wanted to be a diver when i was on the seim team. but sadly my mother forbad it. anyways loved it. i'll enter the contest! i have an idea!

I will be entering purely because I am avoiding studying for midterms, and also because I LOVE this idea.

Also, this story was awesome, as usual. Honestly, it makes me wonder if you get tired of getting SQUEE THAT WAS GREAT reviews from people like me... Maybe if you weren't such a great writer we'd have something else to say :P